https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/3-strikes-one-of-my-best-songs-ever-i-personally-think/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 10:04:16 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/3-strikes-one-of-my-best-songs-ever-i-personally-think/#post-106939 Thu, 16 Jun 2005 17:23:59 +0000
Forgot something from your post, i thought of using feel the healing... but then i thought for the chorus it goes:


You can strike me down,
You can watch me bleeding,
I know you,
I know the feeling, this is the problem i find is i already say feeling?
You, you don't, you don't know the feeling,
Know the dealing,
Know the healing,
All of this sounds so appealing.

That might not make sense to you, but to me it does, i'm not such a pro on song writing but i have gotten hundreds of compliments on my song writing skills. Don't wanna sound cocky at all.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club rejectedagain https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/3-strikes-one-of-my-best-songs-ever-i-personally-think/#post-106939 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/3-strikes-one-of-my-best-songs-ever-i-personally-think/#post-106938 Thu, 16 Jun 2005 17:10:18 +0000
This song is not country, no offense to anyone who likes country but it sucks. Um this is more of a rock type song i guess i could relate to the Foo Fighters. That's what i was going for in writing it, and i personally think it does sound like a rock song so. now to lotto king, the reason of changing the chorus was to make it a bit different and in writing it i thought it sounded cool. Know the dealing means knowing what it feels like when someone does something to you such as a girl, ya know knowing the dealing of the pain. Don't know if that answers your question but...]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club rejectedagain https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/3-strikes-one-of-my-best-songs-ever-i-personally-think/#post-106938 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/3-strikes-one-of-my-best-songs-ever-i-personally-think/#post-106917 Thu, 16 Jun 2005 14:16:34 +0000
I am abit confused as to why your chorus keeps changing ?

aka :Know the dealing,
Know the healing,

then:Know the healing,
Watch it dealing,

may I sugest

" Know the dealing"
"Feel the healing "

for each time your chorus is sung ?
I don't think, know the healing actually means alot

I understand know the dealing

just my thoughts

cheers

L.K :arrow:]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club lotto king https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/3-strikes-one-of-my-best-songs-ever-i-personally-think/#post-106917 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/3-strikes-one-of-my-best-songs-ever-i-personally-think/#post-106887 Thu, 16 Jun 2005 06:39:23 +0000
I think if you're going for a country song, you've got all the elements (although it is a bit long and not repetitive enough for top 40 country stations... that's a compliment by the way :D ).

The critical mass of rhyming, along with the 'gimmick' of the song, however, would make it work well as country (that, unfortunately, is not so much of a compliment :cry: ).

Depends what you were going for.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club SlowPlay https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/3-strikes-one-of-my-best-songs-ever-i-personally-think/#post-106887 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/3-strikes-one-of-my-best-songs-ever-i-personally-think/#post-9681 Wed, 15 Jun 2005 18:30:51 +0000
3 Strikes

Strike 1,
You can strike me down,
You can watch me bleeding,
I know you,
I know the feeling,
You, you don't, you don't know the feeling,
Know the dealing,
Know the healing,
All of this sounds so appealing...


I need somewhere to hide,
That's what you said,
You said you needed,
Somewhere to rest your lonely head,
I let you in,
And I let you stay,
But now it is time,
To get out of my way...


Cause I've been there,
And I've done that,
And I am ready to forget...


Strike 2,
You can strike me down,
You can watch me bleeding,
I know you,
You don't know the feeling,
Know the healing,
Watch it dealing,
All of this sounds so appealing...


Strike 3,
I went on the road today,
Everything I hate is getting in my way,
Then you came up and you buried me,
Cause you, you are so scared of me,
I let you in,
And I let you stay,
But now it is time,
To get out of my way...


Cause I've been there,
And I've done that,
And I am ready to forget...




You can strike me down,
You can watch me bleeding,
I know you,
You don't know the feeling,
Watch it healing,
Watch the dealing,
All of this sounds so appealing...


Strike 1,
I said is cause of you,
And of your insane point of view,
Strike 2,
You can't let go of me,
I tried to ditch you,
Take a hint now can't you see,
Strike 3,
I've had enough of life,
None of this can even suffice,
3 strikes you're out,
Your time is done,
Oh your time is done, done my friend...


Cause I've been there,
And I've done that,
And I am ready to forget...


You can strike me down,
You can watch me bleeding,
I know you,
I know the feeling,
Watch it healing,
Watch the dealing,
All of this sounds so appealing...


Cause I've been there,
And I've done that,
You can watch it healing,
Doesn't all of this sound so appealing,
I've done that...]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club rejectedagain https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/3-strikes-one-of-my-best-songs-ever-i-personally-think/#post-9681