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Would to hear it mate ..

Just a thought on your ending - outro thingy as you put it :lol:

Why not revisit the beginning ..

Music quitens and that whispering vioce comes back singing

Creeps into my dreams
Seeps inside my mind
Festers in my very soul
A nightmare machine……………… on the inside

Just a thought ...

Hilch]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/a-new-breed-of-song/#post-182665 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/a-new-breed-of-song/#post-18301 Thu, 08 Jun 2006 03:48:45 +0000 A very dark, mordbid kinda song, hearing very overdriven, crunchy, drop-C / metal chords for this one.

Nightmare Machine

(whispered)

Creeps into my dreams
Seeps inside my mind
Festers in my very soul
A nightmare machine……………… on the inside

(heavy guitar explosion)

Verse 1

Fighting a private war
Inside an enclosed mind
An enemy invisible
Escapes my detection

Facing a battle
Immense as time and thought
An overpowering soulless golem
A shapeless form inside

Chorus

Creeps into my dreams
Seeps inside my mind
Festers in my very soul
A nightmare machine on the inside

Verse 2

In the midst of myself
Confrontation gains no means
Peering over the edge
Of serenity and sanity

Reasoning brings upon
Revelations written in memory
Demons growing inside my head
Created by my tormented self

Chorus

Creeps into my dreams
Seeps inside my mind
Festers in my very soul
A nightmare machine on the inside

Haven't got an outro verse/chorus thingy yet, might try to add one later.

thoughts, comments etc. welcomed as allways :)

Pete]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/a-new-breed-of-song/#post-18301