https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/a-second-attempt/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 09:23:30 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/a-second-attempt/#post-20578 Thu, 21 Sep 2006 16:13:24 +0000 i do refuse o stay,
near you tonight,
your such a parasite,
i willburn you,
just cause i willnot do,
all the things you say,
for you to be better than me,

Its not alright with me,
to try to be your beauty queen,
Its not alrightfor you to say,
allthe things you said that day!
Dont wanna be your useless bitch,
second on your HIT list,
so crossmy name,
i have no shame,

your commin round,
dont wanna c ur face,
itsmorphed with scars,
looking like imprints of lace,
your not whorhy of,
anything i say,
evenif you think,
imbetter off this way...

its not finished.. and it needs tobemore angry.. and make more sence... lol im trying.. hahahah thanks ur feedback would so greatly appreciated ;)

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