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I'll do my best to give an example for you. I put every word in italics that you might want have as hanging notes.
"We sway in the winds,
And float atop clouds.
Only one heart beat heard,
it's our heartbeat now.
Caressing you tightly, embraced is your soul,
For it's yours that has always kept my own whole."

For a word like "sway," have the 'ay' hang and for "winds", have n hang. Something like that.

Other then that you wrote a great song/poem.

:D]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Ghost https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/a-song-2/#post-174749 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/a-song-2/#post-17417 Tue, 02 May 2006 09:17:32 +0000
And We Dance

Stars of imagination, being reborn above
As the moonlight shines, where we still dance...To celebrate our love.

We sway in the winds,
And float atop clouds.
Only one heart beat heard,
it's our heartbeat now.
Caressing you tightly, embraced is your soul,
For it's yours that has always kept my own whole.

The smell, the warmth, the strength of your touch
(but even your strength, is delicate enough.)
A beauty so faithfully stuck in love's grasp
I pray to Forever, 'make tonight last'
But Forever replies, with memories reflection
As I remember that this, is imagination's deception.

So breathe in slowly,
And I'll open these eyes.
I'll breathe in slowly,
I don't want to cry.

Stars of imagination, will soon decay.
But under the moonlight, is where we'll stay.
This dream may be over, but love is our chance,
For in my heart forever, is where, together, we'll dance.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club stefhy https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/a-song-2/#post-17417