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"Don't you know this may be the last
You have? Doesn't that bother you? ""

I would change 'you have' with 'you do'. Just 'feels' better, can't really explain it. Wouldn't really understand what 'have' would refer to. Final thing is the 'compromise' in the first verse. I can't really understand what you mean by it, and I don't see the compromise in the rest of the song. That, with the fact that it happens to rhyhme, makes it seem rather cheesy. Once again, these things might very well be due to me misunderstanding things. For your information, I have a picture of a dude being in a submarine away from his girlfriend. I guess that might not be what you thought of...]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Ignar Hillström https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/another-comedown/#post-122972 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/another-comedown/#post-11517 Wed, 07 Sep 2005 00:33:25 +0000
Asus2........................Em..................G
I know it's not enough with me here
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But is that the way you always feel
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My hands don't realize
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What my thoughts compromise


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Here or far away ..... I'll hold you
F..........G2.................Asus2
Here by my side .... I breathe you

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And I know if you'll take a chance ...
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Don't you know this may be the last
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You have? Doesn't that bother you?
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Forty days under here - under water
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Forty nights I swam into your living room

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But I just want ... to hold you
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Is it enough ... to lose you?
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And I just want ... to hold you
F........G2............Asus2
Is it enough ... to lose you?


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