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I'm still not convinced you completely believe in what you're saying, but at least you are saying something :D

keep on this, you're gonna be proud of it]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Snoogans775 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/another-song/#post-64587 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/another-song/#post-64584 Fri, 06 Aug 2004 06:10:05 +0000
v1:
Ive got to live or die trying
You tied me down, you clipped my wings
Your Child I was to forever be
but You dont understand that I need to be free

v2:
Ive got to live or die tyring
IVe been shakled by your threats of faliure
Tried to tell me I needed your 9 to 5
but i'm breakin free im living my dream

v3:
Ive got to live or die trying
IVe been a prisoner of myself
fears been chasing me for way to long
Im taking my first step to freedom]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Artistx13 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/another-song/#post-64584 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/another-song/#post-64522 Thu, 05 Aug 2004 15:46:58 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Artistx13 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/another-song/#post-64522 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/another-song/#post-64511 Thu, 05 Aug 2004 09:50:29 +0000
it gives the ring of "rebel without a cause" I have no idea what's holding you down, so I have the right to assume that you may be whining instead of protesting(I apologize if I'm being to harsh, but...)

think of a really great protest/inspirational song, I'm thinking of "Keep On Rockin' In the Free World", Neil Young was pissed off for some of those verses, you can tell because he can supply so many different instances in so many different partrs of life as he explains himself. That is the substance of the song. After that you can really rally people up by tellin' them to keep on rockin' in the free world.

sorry, I'd say some more but I'm choking on a cheez-it]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Snoogans775 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/another-song/#post-64511 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/another-song/#post-3000 Thu, 05 Aug 2004 06:18:47 +0000 and I know its a lil cliche

Intro

I've got to live or Die Trying
No Longer Can I be shackled by this place
I've got to escape and never look back
I've got to live or Die trying

I speak the voice that is 10 thousand strong
we want our freedom before were dead and gone
We refuse to give up like the 10 thousand before

We want our freedom
We want our freedom
We want to live before we die

I've got to live or die trying
I'm in a rut no place to go
Freedom, its my only hope
I've got to live or die trying

I speak the voice that is 10 thousand strong
we want our freedom before were dead and gone
We refuse to give up like the 10 thousand before

Musical Bridge

I've got to live or die trying
I'm a prisoner of myself
No where to go no place to run
Gotta get away and live free

I speak the voice that is 10 thousand strong
we want our freedom before were dead and gone
We refuse to give up like the 10 thousand before

We want our freedom
We want our freedom
WE WANT OUR FREEDOM
Before we all end up dead

Ending (same as musical bridge)]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Artistx13 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/another-song/#post-3000