https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/anyone-interested/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 23:00:54 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/anyone-interested/#post-67209 Tue, 31 Aug 2004 03:20:20 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club nitetrapper https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/anyone-interested/#post-67209 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/anyone-interested/#post-67202 Tue, 31 Aug 2004 02:38:47 +0000
Thanks man...yeah it could be a soft rock song. Thanks for the compliment also.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Fletch Bailey1212 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/anyone-interested/#post-67202 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/anyone-interested/#post-67198 Tue, 31 Aug 2004 02:18:35 +0000
Very nice lyrics by the way! haha]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club bleaseyhighflyer https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/anyone-interested/#post-67198 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/anyone-interested/#post-67185 Tue, 31 Aug 2004 01:12:13 +0000
Also I think that the guitar should come in soft in the beginning and then when the chorus comes in it should get more up beat.

This Part...
My body goes numb
With a blow to my heart
Nothing could feel worse
Nothing could bring more harm

I think should also be more upbeat because it leads into a chorus.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Fletch Bailey1212 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/anyone-interested/#post-67185 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/anyone-interested/#post-67113 Mon, 30 Aug 2004 15:33:44 +0000
What do you have in mind? Accoustic guitar? Piano? Death-metal friendly? Have you got any kind of progression worked out already? If you can give us some kind of heads up, I'm sure any number of our participants could some up with something workable.

You might want to run though some of your lines, just to make sure they all work within the musical constructs,

Best,


A :-)]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Alan Green https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/anyone-interested/#post-67113 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/anyone-interested/#post-3412 Mon, 30 Aug 2004 07:03:21 +0000
My sins hung on me
Like an apple in a tree
Never gonna ask for love
Cuz Ill never be free

I gave up a long time ago
Not wanting to get hurt
Never asked for the pain
But baby I got burnt


-Chorus-
Here I lay and sometimes sit
With my thoughts a pondering
Why did you treat me bad
When I never made you crazy nor mad

Never ever gave up on faith
Until the moment I met you
Always believed in angels
Until my eyes...They layed on you
-Chorus-

My body goes numb
With a blow to my heart
Nothing could feel worse
Nothing could bring more harm

-Chorus-

Ive always shared this story
To a million people its true
No one could change the way
The way ill always have feelings for you

Oh my dreams are floating
Like a cloud in the sky
You never leave my mind
Even when I close my eyes

Ive always shared this story
To a million people its true
No one could change the way
The way ill always have feelings for you

-Chorus-]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Fletch Bailey1212 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/anyone-interested/#post-3412