https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/beatles-adaptation-feedback-please/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 14:48:11 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/beatles-adaptation-feedback-please/#post-97962 Tue, 12 Apr 2005 11:12:03 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club x_gyllenhaalic_x https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/beatles-adaptation-feedback-please/#post-97962 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/beatles-adaptation-feedback-please/#post-97946 Tue, 12 Apr 2005 06:03:04 +0000
like homer said though... 'lisa, songs don't have to make sense, like "shamma-lanaga-ding-dong" or "give peace a chance". So, even though some of it doesn't make sense to me (only small parts), it's all good (that was my point)

hoo roo

p]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club plooky https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/beatles-adaptation-feedback-please/#post-97946 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/beatles-adaptation-feedback-please/#post-8366 Mon, 11 Apr 2005 10:13:55 +0000 I was screamin' at a rock pleadingly
It's bonejuice scrunched flogged tired dopamine.

toadwise,
backward starfish hunt elk vitamins
They ate cerebellum diagonal monkey sins



Magic metal mauled Jackie's lover
Double title iced halfdome's brother

Man with the catcher escorts to deaths door
Paul just bluffed but Johnny got 4

The pope was a muppet and Reagan was a robot
The pooh bear pillaged Nixon's honeypot.

Round room Billy stuffed tobacco dong
sewed wet fabric and spit forked sing song

Shrubbery squeezed sphere squirt petrol
Saladin's sand sucked uranium and flesh oil

Mayors never sizzle pearls in DC.
Red scaled mourners reap sunshine greentree

Sacrifice fly Al and Mo's men on the base scored
Yankee jumper prongs melted to the mother board

A Bellyflop slide between corners skewed 18
Another blip blanked and dug keystone scenery

It's showtime eternal for Charlie Browned John Q
electroded veggie gave roots to the kangaroo

That was yesterday,
Crunching chords for mental therapy,
Dead skin and blood on fretboard tapestry.
I mourn for yesterday.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club hairballxavier https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/beatles-adaptation-feedback-please/#post-8366