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thanks guys for both your responses. :)]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club urbnite https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/broken/#post-83818 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/broken/#post-83744 Fri, 07 Jan 2005 18:16:03 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club musicmaniac221 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/broken/#post-83744 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/broken/#post-83737 Fri, 07 Jan 2005 17:35:50 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club guitargeek https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/broken/#post-83737 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/broken/#post-6183 Fri, 07 Jan 2005 14:45:00 +0000
first time poster here, just stumbled across this site and thought i'd chime in with something i wrote today. haven't really shared my lyrics with folks i don't know since they're what i'm most apprehensive about, but this site seems like a good place for feedback. so feel free to share any thoughts - all input's much appreciated.

thanks!

-d


sitting in a
sad & lonely parking lot
wishing i were
on a train that never stops
a train would take me away
away
take me away from you
away
take me away from you

the weather
seems somehow off today
perception
broken down, blown away
imagining a world without you
a world
a world that's without you
a world
a world that's without you


what do i have to
do to get out of this place
what do i have to
pay to get out of this place
who do i have to kill
to get the hell out of here

i do love
all the crazy sh** you say
but really
hate the way you make me pay
i'm broke and broken from you
broke and
broken by you
broken and
broken by you

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