https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/check-this-one-out-called-i-wish/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 04:46:22 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/check-this-one-out-called-i-wish/paged/2/#post-107731 Tue, 21 Jun 2005 18:32:32 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club rejectedagain https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/check-this-one-out-called-i-wish/paged/2/#post-107731 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/check-this-one-out-called-i-wish/paged/2/#post-107729 Tue, 21 Jun 2005 18:23:49 +0000
So I decided to go on the offensive and review other people's songs while writing my own. It's kinda fun.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club MetalWerk2 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/check-this-one-out-called-i-wish/paged/2/#post-107729 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/check-this-one-out-called-i-wish/paged/2/#post-107657 Mon, 20 Jun 2005 23:25:46 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club rejectedagain https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/check-this-one-out-called-i-wish/paged/2/#post-107657 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/check-this-one-out-called-i-wish/paged/2/#post-107651 Mon, 20 Jun 2005 22:23:27 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club rejectedagain https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/check-this-one-out-called-i-wish/paged/2/#post-107651 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/check-this-one-out-called-i-wish/#post-107648 Mon, 20 Jun 2005 22:11:10 +0000
Knowing that your 15 I'm highly impressed. I think you have a bright future in song writing. Never give up or you'll regret it.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club MetalWerk2 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/check-this-one-out-called-i-wish/#post-107648 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/check-this-one-out-called-i-wish/#post-107643 Mon, 20 Jun 2005 21:01:31 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club rejectedagain https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/check-this-one-out-called-i-wish/#post-107643 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/check-this-one-out-called-i-wish/#post-107637 Mon, 20 Jun 2005 20:21:37 +0000 The '...'s in the song are where I hear pauses. I'm putting this to music this week. My son is 14 and plays electric guitar so maybe he can play it.

Pirates Festival
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(18th century military drum beat and heavy metal guitars)

Circus pirates... they dance in the streets, for one festive weekend each year.
Plastic sabres... swinging wild and free. Scaring children and babies to tears.
But the pirates are waiting, they're grinding their teeth, as they plan their evil return.
If this show becomes real, gets out of control, we'll be flogged and our corpses will burn.

Chorus:
Their flag is flying, the Jolly Roger.
I don't... think they're pretending.
They're drinking blood, slurring nasty songs.
Our souls we'll be defending.

Black Jack... a scar on his cheek, leather boots, long beard, wooden sword.
With his eye patch... he stomps down the street, he believes he's leading the hoard.
"A vast ye mateys, biscuit-maggots!" he shouts, swigging rum, his voice full of scurvy.
He releases his parrot. It's dieing to pounce. This is not your sweet little birdie.

Spectators... they gasp and they stare, but some fools just poke fun and laugh.
And the pirates... in shadows they wait, just to cut gutless tourists in half.
But it's all for fun, and fun for all, the silly sea-goers blabber.
Just avoid those cold, lifeless alleyways, where evil pirates may gather.

Chorus:
Sound the alarm, run for your lives.
The days of pillage draw near.
Kiss your children goodnight, and pray for your wives.
Cause soon you may live your nightmares.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club MetalWerk2 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/check-this-one-out-called-i-wish/#post-107637 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/check-this-one-out-called-i-wish/#post-107635 Mon, 20 Jun 2005 20:05:23 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club rejectedagain https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/check-this-one-out-called-i-wish/#post-107635 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/check-this-one-out-called-i-wish/#post-107632 Mon, 20 Jun 2005 19:50:18 +0000
The only one who was honest with me was my creative writing teacher (bast*rd), and I was always pissed at him. But now I know he was right on. So this time around I'm writing about other people in very different situations. It forces me to think outside of myself.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club MetalWerk2 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/check-this-one-out-called-i-wish/#post-107632 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/check-this-one-out-called-i-wish/#post-107631 Mon, 20 Jun 2005 19:33:21 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club rejectedagain https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/check-this-one-out-called-i-wish/#post-107631