https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cheeks-turn-red/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 20:17:14 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cheeks-turn-red/#post-248097 Thu, 14 Jun 2007 03:37:57 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club saint_duud https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cheeks-turn-red/#post-248097 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cheeks-turn-red/#post-247893 Wed, 13 Jun 2007 05:04:44 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club larss7on https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cheeks-turn-red/#post-247893 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cheeks-turn-red/#post-247891 Wed, 13 Jun 2007 04:58:19 +0000
cheers for the feedback all.

http://www.richardcallaghanguitar.com]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club larss7on https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cheeks-turn-red/#post-247891 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cheeks-turn-red/#post-64169 Fri, 30 Jul 2004 03:05:48 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club dragona43 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cheeks-turn-red/#post-64169 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cheeks-turn-red/#post-64162 Fri, 30 Jul 2004 02:20:19 +0000
totally understand what your saying....applied some changes etc

thanks all :)]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club larss7on https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cheeks-turn-red/#post-64162 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cheeks-turn-red/#post-63936 Mon, 26 Jul 2004 20:37:52 +0000
We looked like lovers
In the Late Afternoon
I tore off the covers
N you said “baby not so soon”

etc....]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club gmilam https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cheeks-turn-red/#post-63936 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cheeks-turn-red/#post-63935 Mon, 26 Jul 2004 20:36:01 +0000
The only real comment is this:

They felt like lovers
In their candle lit duvet

duvets sounds out of context with the simplicity of the other lyrics. It sounds like you just wanted to add something more complex in there.

I think candle lit room or something like that would be better.

I think it has good meter and I really like the chorus, but I would make it "until OUR cheecks turn red" This way they both get to have some fun!

Keep writing!]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club gmilam https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cheeks-turn-red/#post-63935 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cheeks-turn-red/#post-63852 Sun, 25 Jul 2004 08:20:29 +0000
first off, I would not want to memorize this song for a show, in other words, the repetition is too much, you've gotta keep the song moving, never let it plateau for too long, and this song is straight as a laser, and especially with this stuff, it begs for power, and real intensity, listen to that queen song, you'll see what I'm talking about

I don't get why you say they are "like lovers", they are lovers

I like the Al Green spin, talking about making it last

other than that, this is cool stuff, I jsut hope you have a wah pedal :D]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Snoogans775 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cheeks-turn-red/#post-63852 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cheeks-turn-red/#post-2874 Sat, 24 Jul 2004 02:54:35 +0000
Here goes

Cheeks Turn Red

They looked like lovers
In the Late Afternoon
He tore off the covers
N she said “baby not so soon”

"Cos I just wanna lay with you
While we lie here in your bed
And darling I'm gonna kiss you
Im gonna kiss you , I'm gonna kiss you
Until your cheeks turn red."

They felt like lovers
In their candle lit duvet
She slid down his body
N he asked if everythings ok

"Cos I just wanna make it perfect.
To keep that smile upon your face
And baby we're gonna make love
We're gonna make love, We're gonna make love
Until your cheeks turn red."

SOLO

They smiled like lovers
While the stars shined in their eyes
They turned to each other
Each pleasantly surprised.

Cos Everytime before now
Its been the same as the past
But this time its special
Its special , Its special
Lets make it last

But this time its special
It's special , It's special
Lets make it last]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club larss7on https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cheeks-turn-red/#post-2874