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The weight of the world,
Is a burden we cannot bear
A fate we unfurl
a consequence that we share.

I like this verse, four meaningful, standalone lines that speak a strong message in few words... always gold when it comes to songs. This would make a great bridge, if you were planning to rearrange versus or anything. But really.. these lyrics are both heartfelt and meaningful- great job.

Jacqui]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Jacqui1627 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cleanse/#post-99153 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cleanse/#post-8437 Thu, 14 Apr 2005 01:03:11 +0000
What drives the weak?
Is it pride or greed or envy?
A vicious cycle seeks,
to destroy all of what you see.

What drives the strong?
Is is love or lust or power?
They try so long,
but can do nothing but cower.

Break into this selfish world,
I cannot hear my thoughts,
It makes me fear to see,
Shake me out of this haze,
I cant see the light,
Cleanse and give me purity.
OVER MY DEAD.... LIFE
I STAND UNFALTERED
Cleanse and give me purity.

The weight of the world,
Is a burden we cannot bear
A fate we unfurl
a consequence that we share.

I can see the end,
Its so close just before us all.
The trends we can mend,
Is it too late, is it too late?

Break into this selfish world,
I cannot hear my thoughts,
It makes me fear to see,
Shake me out of this haze,
I cant see the light,
Cleanse and give me purity.
OVER MY DEAD.... LIFE
I STAND UNFALTERED
Cleanse and give me purity.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club nocturne181 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/cleanse/#post-8437