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Nice writing.

One thing I might say is that I'm not getting the meter. I think there's alot of great things here, but just needs to be "cleaned" up abit in order to get the feel. Happy writing. :) G.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club rocketgirl https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/dear-young-lady/#post-117648 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/dear-young-lady/#post-116811 Thu, 11 Aug 2005 03:17:00 +0000
I'm cruel and consistently a bore
So if I promise to change
Be exciting and handsomely warm

And here:

Will you sit with me on a low rolling hill?
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