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                        <title>dislike</title>
                        <link>https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/disliked-please-take-a-look/#post-85354</link>
                        <pubDate>Mon, 17 Jan 2005 09:06:20 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[Hello Noel...took a trip to your web page...only heard a little bit as file transfer was slow..you may want to check into that...but what I did hear I liked..cool rythym...keep searching  fo...]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[Hello Noel...took a trip to your web page...only heard a little bit as file transfer was slow..you may want to check into that...but what I did hear I liked..cool rythym...keep searching  for the notes....I heard "John" used to sit at a piano and pick out only a few notes and beat them to death back and forth and upside down...keep it simple....as for the "disliked" thing...how about unliked....it`s one of those words where you can use it at the end.."I feel unliked"...or at the beginning of the next, or another line.."Unliked by you"....cooker]]></content:encoded>
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                        <title>RE: Disliked (please take a look)</title>
                        <link>https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/disliked-please-take-a-look/#post-84702</link>
                        <pubDate>Thu, 13 Jan 2005 01:56:48 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[OK, my bad.  It was wrong of me to say its too short.  Ive thought of other songs and they have short choruses and bridges too...lol in that case, this song is really good...sorry about that...]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[OK, my bad.  It was wrong of me to say its too short.  Ive thought of other songs and they have short choruses and bridges too...lol in that case, this song is really good...sorry about that last post.]]></content:encoded>
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                        <title>RE: Disliked (please take a look)</title>
                        <link>https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/disliked-please-take-a-look/#post-84487</link>
                        <pubDate>Wed, 12 Jan 2005 00:23:45 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[Hi!thanks for the backup&quot;Dislike of you&quot; really sounds better, I&#039;m sorry I write this bad   :oops: I know the chorus and the bridge are too short... and the melody is hard to figure out...I ...]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[Hi!<br>thanks for the backup<br>"Dislike of you" really sounds better, I'm sorry I write this bad   :oops: <br>I know the chorus and the bridge are too short... and the melody is hard to figure out...<br>I will record a rough version and post it soon if the post is still alive<br>See you soon]]></content:encoded>
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                        <title>RE: Disliked (please take a look)</title>
                        <link>https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/disliked-please-take-a-look/#post-84373</link>
                        <pubDate>Tue, 11 Jan 2005 01:39:08 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[What? What does length have to do with it?]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[What? What does length have to do with it?]]></content:encoded>
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                        <title>RE: Disliked (please take a look)</title>
                        <link>https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/disliked-please-take-a-look/#post-84364</link>
                        <pubDate>Tue, 11 Jan 2005 01:24:49 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[The bridge is too short to be called a bridge and the chorus is too short to be called a chorus in my opinion.  mmmm other than that, the verses seem good.]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[The bridge is too short to be called a bridge and the chorus is too short to be called a chorus in my opinion.  mmmm other than that, the verses seem good.]]></content:encoded>
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                        <title>RE: Disliked (please take a look)</title>
                        <link>https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/disliked-please-take-a-look/#post-84353</link>
                        <pubDate>Tue, 11 Jan 2005 00:11:39 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[OK here&#039;s the skinny. While reading your so called chorus it was hard for me to understand what kind of &quot;melody you were thinking of&quot; In the first verse I would change &quot;Dislike from you&quot; to ...]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[OK here's the skinny. While reading your so called chorus it was hard for me to understand what kind of "melody you were thinking of" In the first verse I would change "Dislike from you" to "Dislike of you" it just makes more since that way. Totally redo the chorus maestro and post what your second version is. The rest of it is good so keep up that much. Please read my posts I did a while back maybe they'll give you some ideas. Peace out!]]></content:encoded>
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                        <title>Disliked (please take a look)</title>
                        <link>https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/disliked-please-take-a-look/#post-6263</link>
                        <pubDate>Mon, 10 Jan 2005 21:03:36 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[Hello!please take a read at this new song and tell me anything you think about itSuggestions, changes, and critiques are wellcomeDislikedV1 There are many things that I dislike from youFrom ...]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[Hello!<br>please take a read at this new song and tell me anything you think about it<br>Suggestions, changes, and critiques are wellcome<br><br>Disliked<br><br>V1 <br>There are many things that I <br>dislike from you<br>From the way you move to the way you talk<br>I detest a lot<br>You don't hear what I am singing<br>you don't even want to try<br>Seems that all I have to say<br>makes you want to cry<br><br>C<br>I feel disliked x2<br><br>V2<br>Knew you since the day you came<br>rolling up the stairs<br>from the moment you bagan to show<br>you were coming here to stay<br>I saw your intentions from<br>a million miles away<br>easily you dropped me out,<br>kicked me off the way<br><br>Bridge<br>you... made me... feel<br>you... made ... me<br><br>C<br>Feel ... disliked<br><br>please tell what you think.<br>thanks!]]></content:encoded>
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