https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/falling/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 15:17:04 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/falling/#post-138191 Fri, 11 Nov 2005 07:38:03 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club nolongerme https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/falling/#post-138191 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/falling/#post-138074 Fri, 11 Nov 2005 00:03:02 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/falling/#post-138074 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/falling/#post-138072 Thu, 10 Nov 2005 23:51:21 +0000
In the following you may want to add the "Don't"s in front of the the two following lines where the **** are or it is hard to follow.

Don't ****ing tell me to go to bed,
**** Tell me to return my guitar
**** Tell me to give up,



A little tweaking and it is actually pretty good.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Nils https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/falling/#post-138072 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/falling/#post-13015 Thu, 10 Nov 2005 22:47:24 +0000
It's not my normal style of writing, this piece is very emo. Well, here you go, have fun tearing this one apart.


Falling to my knees


I can't take it any more,
This building pain inside,
It's hard to carry on,
I want to let go,
End this suffering,

Leave me alone,
Is it too much to ask?
Your presence haunts me,
I hear your voice resounding in my mind
Chilling to the bone,
I'm falling to my knees,

I want to be free,
Don't ****ing tell me to go to bed,
Tell me to return my guitar
Tell me to give up,
Threaten to take everything away from me,
I don't give a ****,
I have nothing,

I don't want to be like you,
Give me a chance to be me
Not part of your flawed design

Someone throw me a lifeline,
I'm drowning in this pool of sorrow,
Intoxicating,
This endless suffering is unbearable,
Falling to my knees,
Let it end]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Jwakefield https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/falling/#post-13015