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Fragmented Contrition

Will you hear my cries
Will you help me?
I hide it all inside
All this pain, no-one can see

As my daylight dies
I feel it creeping
Threatening to destroy
Everything I believe

Twisted lies become fragmented
A state of mind so ruthlessly augmented
Master of my own illusionary world
Nothing is real, but still I can't let it go

Depression and loss, sacrificed self-belief
Contorted to a painfull release
An endless chasym of unfullfilled promise
Eternal darkness in the heart of this beast

As my daylight dies
I feel it creeping
Threatening to destroy
Everything I believe

Will you hear my cries
Will you help me?
I hide it all inside
All this pain, no-one can see

A mind of anger and pain, so threatened by
Fear of failure, crushed worthless dreams
Hear my cries, feel the pain
Of being torn apart at the seams

As daylight dies
I feel it creeping
This is it, there is no escaping
The eternal torment fermenting within
On my knees I face
My last act of contrition

Thanks for reading, comments / feedback is always appreciated :)

Pete]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Embrace_the_Darkness https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/fragmented-contrition/#post-27238