https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/free/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 11:10:13 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/free/#post-236326 Fri, 30 Mar 2007 12:01:35 +0000 btw, I would love to hear you sing it, whenever you have the time to record...
they did tell me to do the same for my song, but I'm not that cool :lol: I'm a recording challenged singer :wink:
tzo, can't wait to hear it!]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club missmatilde https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/free/#post-236326 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/free/#post-236293 Fri, 30 Mar 2007 01:54:27 +0000
Unfortunately, that won't be for a few weeks as I'm away from my guitar for a much-deserved holdiay from university! :lol:

Thanks for the comments.

Pete]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Embrace_the_Darkness https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/free/#post-236293 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/free/#post-236251 Thu, 29 Mar 2007 17:02:10 +0000 "Free as a bird on the breeze
No more worries no conflict
Nothing but inner peace"

the only not-that-important thing, maybe some punctuation would help get a sense of the rythm, just a thought. ;-)
Nice job,
Matilde]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club missmatilde https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/free/#post-236251 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/free/#post-24945 Thu, 29 Mar 2007 03:20:27 +0000
I hope you enjoy it.

Free

Verse 1
Casting off the worries
No more stress on my back
Shedding all of that fear
Shines the light
Fades the black
If you want I can show you
How to be free like me

(and) Once you've seen….

Chorus
Then we can
Fly away
Above the streets and trees
No more ties to bind
Nothing holding me
Down onto the ground
I finally feel so free

Verse 2
My shoulder's now lighter
With no world weighing down
We'll have no more tears
Turn that frown
Upside down
And I know I can show you
How to be free like me

(and) Once you've seen….

Chorus
Then we can
Fly away
Above the streets and trees
No more ties to bind
Nothing holding me
Down onto the ground
I finally feel so free

I finally feel so

Bridge
Liberated
No longer frustrated
See the smiles through the darkness
Chases the clouds away
(but) Leaves a
Silver lining
Shining for just
You and me

Take my hand, you'll see….

Chorus and Outro
Then we can
Fly away
Above the streets and trees
No more ties to bind
Nothing holding me
Down onto the ground
I finally feel

That I can
Fly away
Free as a bird on the breeze
No more worries no conflict
Nothing but inner peace
Oh I'm happy to show you
How to be free like me

Oh how to be free like me

Oh how to be free…like….me (last three words strung out with one chord strum each)

Comments / opinions welcomed with open arms :)

Oh and if you're reading this Trev...Looks like I finally managed to write something Happy! :lol:

Pete]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Embrace_the_Darkness https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/free/#post-24945