Him - Guitar Noise Songwriting Club

RE: Him

guitargeek — Fri, 14 Jan 2005 22:57:44 +0000

thank you i appreciate you comments, check out my other songs if youhave time!

RE: Him

m07zm4n — Fri, 14 Jan 2005 20:55:02 +0000

Yes, this "we" is great!!!

the only thing I didn't quite like were:
"He's always knocking on my door
He's always begging me for more "
but that might just be me....
besides, the last lines really made up for it
"I don't want to be your someone"...
that's dead-on!!!!!

RE: Him

guitargeek — Tue, 11 Jan 2005 02:20:21 +0000

kinda talkin to myself there!

RE: Him

musicmaniac221 — Tue, 11 Jan 2005 01:21:43 +0000

Well...that is a very angry song...but no not crap...might i ask...whose "we"?

Him

guitargeek — Mon, 10 Jan 2005 02:10:31 +0000

just a song i wrote in about 2 minutes to vent some frustrations, sorry if its crap but i need to blurt!

HIM

You say be yourself so why are you lying
You say it's a drag so ill just keep on crying
Get your own identity
Stop stealing everything from me
Take your notes and take your clothes
And get the fu
Ill take it
Ill take anything
Just to get away
Away from him
He's a loser we don't need him
But he keeps coming back

You got a girlfriend but your still after me
You got it worked out so why are you blinding me
Get your own identity
Stop taking everything from me
Take your notes and take your clothes
And get the fu
Ill take it
Ill take anything
Just to get away
Away from him
He's a loser we don't need him
But he keeps coming back

He's always knocking on my door
He's always begging me for more
Why wont he leave me alone?
don't care what you've done
don't care what you've done
I don't wanna be your someone
I don't wanna be your someone