RE: hmm help

MetalWerk2 — Wed, 15 Jun 2005 19:59:39 +0000

I tell my daughter, who has just started writing poetry, DO NOT bleed on the page. You're just not good enough. Only the best of the best can write about personal experience and stay objective enough to write well. You're seriously not alone. I could write volumes of personal crap and it would all come off terrible.

My college professor would slam me constantly for writing personal stuff. Show, do not tell, was rule number one and that's nearly impossible when you're writing about lost love.

I suggest writing about an inanimate object and not a rose or a gun or cloudy day since those will drag you back to your girlfriend. Write about a pencil or write about a day at the zoo. You may think, "no way", but just try. I would love to read 50 lines about pencil. could be quite interesting.

Just my opinion.

hmm help

herbiehancock — Thu, 09 Jun 2005 08:35:11 +0000

i have me a little bit of a problem.
well two actually.
firstly,
i was wondering where i could find good FREE online voice lessons. i used to have a voice, then the combination of college, beer, and mary( i will love you forever) jane came into pla and know i think( it sounds to me) that ive lost my tone. i cant hit anything. it kills me. i need to find a good source of lessons and whatnot to keep on point.
secondly,
i have the exact opposite of writers block. like, i can write. ALOT. but... the catch is the only understandable topic i can write about is this one girl. i tr and write constantly. i have a few notebooks. but usually i alwas end up migrating towards this one girl. shes obviously meant alot to me, but everytime i pick up my pen ro start typing it goes back to her. anyone got any suggestions?
lemme know PM me or w/e.
-herb (<---- i love you)

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RE: hmm help

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