https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/home-2/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 23:58:47 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/home-2/#post-282539 Mon, 25 Feb 2008 20:27:17 +0000 I hope that some day I'll be able to form my own band and to be the singer of my own songs, which is much better.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/home-2/#post-282539 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/home-2/#post-282467 Mon, 25 Feb 2008 02:44:54 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club coleclark https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/home-2/#post-282467 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/home-2/#post-282441 Sun, 24 Feb 2008 21:47:33 +0000
Actually, it can be any style, and the problem is that it's not put to music yet, and I would love someone who is more of a composer to help me with that.

And no, as I've said, I don't want to change anything.
By the way, the metaphor "behind my eyelashes" means just closed eyes, which stands for dreaming.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/home-2/#post-282441 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/home-2/#post-276420 Thu, 03 Jan 2008 17:37:56 +0000 I was imagining the tune "Back Home Again" by John Denver while reading it.
You might want to change eyelashes to eyelids.
I'm not even sure how one would look behind pieces of hair (eyelashes)

(What part of "won't change anything" don't I understand?)]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club KR2 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/home-2/#post-276420 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/home-2/#post-276397 Thu, 03 Jan 2008 08:28:11 +0000 I like the lyrics .]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club jasonggabbott https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/home-2/#post-276397 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/home-2/#post-275479 Mon, 24 Dec 2007 20:32:00 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club crkt246 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/home-2/#post-275479 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/home-2/#post-275475 Mon, 24 Dec 2007 20:19:33 +0000 Thanks for posting the song. Adios......LWJ]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club lwj001 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/home-2/#post-275475 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/home-2/#post-275435 Mon, 24 Dec 2007 11:04:45 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/home-2/#post-275435 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/home-2/#post-274980 Thu, 20 Dec 2007 12:35:11 +0000 Not much in the lyrics I would change, but here's a couple suggestions:
Mysterious city that I've never seen -
I call it my home, it is where I feel in. Mysterious city that I've never seen
I call it my home, feels like where I've been
Love
That I found one day,
Light
In the end of the way Love
Love has found a way
Home
At the end of the day]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club lwj001 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/home-2/#post-274980 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/home-2/#post-28379 Sun, 07 Oct 2007 19:29:38 +0000
Raindrops,
Quietly falling from skies,
Memories,
Now left far behind,
Traces,
Hidden deep in the dust,
Faces,
Empty dreams, angst and lust.

Here start all the ways
To the end of nowhere,
Here misery reigns,
But no one ever cares.
When I close my eyes,
See behind my eyelashes
Some strange city of lights -
It's revived from the ashes.

Mysterious city that I've never seen -
I call it my home, it is where I feel in.
I've found my shelter
In a far-away place,
I'll take you with me, no matter what it takes.

The city enchants me,
It tempts, captivates;
But something calls back,
As reminds I can't stay.
Without you, love,
It just can't be my home.
You think I would stay,
I would leave you alone?

Mysterious city that I've never seen -
I call it my home, it is where I feel in.
I've found my shelter
In a far-away place,
I'll take you with me, no matter what it takes.

Raindrops,
Quietly falling from skies,
Memories
That I can't leave behind,
Love
That I found one day,
Light
In the end of the way.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/home-2/#post-28379