I like this. here's another - Guitar Noise Songwriting Club https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-like-this-heres-another/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 09:05:16 +0000 wpForo 60 RE: I like this. here's another https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-like-this-heres-another/#post-74955 Fri, 05 Nov 2004 07:42:43 +0000
Wow, I thought these lyrics spoke loud and clear. Its a story of a woman thats been abused. Who knows, maybe she was evil and deserved it. I"m teasing. No man or woman should ever be beaten.
This actually was the first song I ever wrote. Interesting, I'll keep it in mind. Read it again and see if It makes more sense to you ok?
In any event, thanks for checking it out.I didn't think anybody was going to.

Holding my breath for your reply :D]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club pixnstrings https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-like-this-heres-another/#post-74955 RE: I like this. here's another https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-like-this-heres-another/#post-74928 Fri, 05 Nov 2004 04:22:56 +0000 She left that place, she's hurting. She's been there before...
The listener doesn't know what she has seen that made her so desperate.
I don't feel any compassion with the girl/women.
She could even be a selfish bitch who left because she made yet
another mistake.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Oliver https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-like-this-heres-another/#post-74928 I like this. here's another https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-like-this-heres-another/#post-4643 Sun, 31 Oct 2004 07:18:31 +0000
She picks up her things
pulls her clothes from a drawer
Tears are streaming down
shes been here before

screen door closes behind her
she feels empty inside
but she knows it's the right thing to do
and tells the cabby to drive

shes got to get out of this place
she'll make somehow
Leaves behind no sign and no trace
She'll make it somehow
So far away

As she stares out the window
she reflects on her life
To many broken bones
too many bruises
now shes finally realized
finally realized

That she's got to get out of this place
She'll make somehow
leaves behind no sign and no trace
she'll make it somehow
make it somehow
so far away]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club pixnstrings https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-like-this-heres-another/#post-4643