https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-need-you/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 02:22:52 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-need-you/#post-63988 Tue, 27 Jul 2004 08:45:44 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Taylorplayer https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-need-you/#post-63988 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-need-you/#post-63930 Mon, 26 Jul 2004 20:20:47 +0000 ...just a thought.

Keep up the writing!]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club gmilam https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-need-you/#post-63930 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-need-you/#post-63877 Sun, 25 Jul 2004 23:45:57 +0000
it didn't change, it just hit a plateau and rode it out, you should think up some more material, or just shorten the whole thing, ah, but it's good

lots of pleasant words in there, whole thing is very comftorable

EVERYBODY, where's the critiques? this forum is dead as long as you don't critique people's poems! :(]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Snoogans775 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-need-you/#post-63877 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-need-you/#post-2886 Sun, 25 Jul 2004 12:59:19 +0000
Verse 1
Looking and pictures of us
I can't help but smile
All the things running through my head
Have made all of this worthwhile

I guess dreams can come true
I'm just glad that you agree
I don't need too much
Just the promise that you'll always be with me

Chorus
I need you
I've never needed anything quite so bad
Still see you
Remembering the good times that we've had
I love you
With just a little thought I come undone
I've always known, I've always known
That you were the one

Verse 2
We've lived oceans apart
So many miles away
Never been so ready for anything
Just counting down the days

I can't wait to hear your voice
I'll say I miss you on the phone
One more week and you and I
Will never ever have to be alone

Repeat Chorus
Breakdown
It's been so long since I've seen you
So help me to remember
I miss the way that you kissed me
Your lips so soft and tender

There's many things I've noticed
That I can't figure out
But these head-run-wild emotions
Leave me little room for doubt
Repeat Chorus]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Taylorplayer https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-need-you/#post-2886