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You never give me time,
time for myself.

I cant see how the rythm works here thats all.

On the plus side, a nicely worded song!

Keep up the good work]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club bleaseyhighflyer https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-thought-2/#post-64370 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-thought-2/#post-64331 Sun, 01 Aug 2004 10:31:17 +0000
for example: I may have misunderstood your intention but for the bit
and although it sounds like an idea
a girl needs some space. i would have wrote:

and an idea though it sounds
time and space are her bounds

Hope this helps.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club guy_d https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-thought-2/#post-64331 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-thought-2/#post-2940 Fri, 30 Jul 2004 05:17:34 +0000
"i thought"


i thought i wanted you
wanted you all for me
needed you to love me ...


but now that you care
i don't want it from you
you hang on my every word
and it kind of makes me sick.


you leave me 40 messages
when you know i'm away
you never give me time
time for myself.


i thought i needed you
needed someone to need me
but now that you're finally giving me
the attention i craved i don't want it ...
from you.


you wanted to make plans
every single day
you push me
when i'm already on the verge.


you never want to let me go
always want to be with me
and although it sounds like an idea
a girl needs some space.


i thought i needed you
needed someone to need me
but now that you're finally giving me
the attention i craved i don't want it ...
from you.


i love you before
and you pushed me away
now its the other way around
so i'll do the same.


i thought i needed you
needed someone to need me
but now that you're finally giving me
the attention i craved i don't want it ...
from you.

please let me know what you think. i wasn't going to label every part of the song but i figured it would help with side notes. for the music is soft, acoustic guitars and gives off the feeling of romance but once starts, to the end, it is more acoustic but more angry feeling and louder.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club xlosexyoux https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-thought-2/#post-2940