https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-thought/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 01:50:37 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-thought/#post-64368 Mon, 02 Aug 2004 10:44:37 +0000
you're not describing anything, you just explain and tell your thoughts without using any metaphors, imagery, or any other tools to help the listener. There must be something in your head other than words that you can pull out and smack on the paper.

besides that, you described the situation well]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Snoogans775 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-thought/#post-64368 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-thought/#post-64350 Sun, 01 Aug 2004 23:10:40 +0000
I especially like the bridge, it's a great summary.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-thought/#post-64350 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-thought/#post-64332 Sun, 01 Aug 2004 10:35:09 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club guy_d https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-thought/#post-64332 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-thought/#post-2939 Fri, 30 Jul 2004 05:14:17 +0000
"i thought"


i thought i wanted you
wanted you all for me
needed you to love me ...


but now that you care
i don't want it from you
you hang on my every word
and it kind of makes me sick.


you leave me 40 messages
when you know i'm away
you never give me time
time for myself.


i thought i needed you
needed someone to need me
but now that you're finally giving me
the attention i craved i don't want it ...
from you.


you wanted to make plans
every single day
you push me
when i'm already on the verge.


you never want to let me go
always want to be with me
and although it sounds like an idea
a girl needs some space.


i thought i needed you
needed someone to need me
but now that you're finally giving me
the attention i craved i don't want it ...
from you.


i love you before
and you pushed me away
now its the other way around
so i'll do the same.


i thought i needed you
needed someone to need me
but now that you're finally giving me
the attention i craved i don't want it ...
from you.

please let me know what you think. i wasn't going to label every part of the song but i figured it would help with side notes. for the music is soft, acoustic guitars and gives off the feeling of romance but once starts, to the end, it is more acoustic but more angry feeling and louder.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club xlosexyoux https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/i-thought/#post-2939