https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/in-dreams/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 05:58:13 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/in-dreams/#post-84437 Tue, 11 Jan 2005 15:45:13 +0000 When too much is never enough Love those lines!

Great writing.
G]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club gjbrake https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/in-dreams/#post-84437 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/in-dreams/#post-84406 Tue, 11 Jan 2005 07:16:45 +0000
Afew suggestions.

That dream
I have always been dreaming
Has finally come true
That dream
I have always believed in
I have found it in you

I think it may work better if you took out afew of the past tense indicators.

That dream
I've always been dreaming
Has finally come true
that dream
I always believed in
I found it in you

it just takes out afew words that would make it a bit a mouthful to sing, and makes it flow a little better.

Just a guess, but this seems like a piano ballad...
would I be correct? :)

Great work,
J]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Jacqui1627 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/in-dreams/#post-84406 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/in-dreams/#post-84369 Tue, 11 Jan 2005 01:34:55 +0000 1.) If your a good d@mn writer and its not personal experience
2.) If its straight personal experience...

I think its #2... I like this...thats my only suggestion...my last post.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club musicmaniac221 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/in-dreams/#post-84369 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/in-dreams/#post-84358 Tue, 11 Jan 2005 01:17:23 +0000 Whatever the opinion, good or bad, just spit it out! :lol:]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club ImpossiblePrincess https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/in-dreams/#post-84358 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/in-dreams/#post-83414 Thu, 06 Jan 2005 01:07:17 +0000 And they all left me wondering That line I like but maybe change wondering to wAndering...hmmm?
Great song! Very touching.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club musicmaniac221 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/in-dreams/#post-83414 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/in-dreams/#post-6140 Wed, 05 Jan 2005 22:28:41 +0000 Since the day when love intrigued me
I had seen the end
But the dream refused to free me

Many lovers have come
And they all left me wondering
Thought I'd found the one
But there never was that special something

That special something we call love
When too much is still not enough

(chorus)
The only dream that never shattered
When my heart was broken in two
The only dream that ever mattered
Was finding a love so true
That dream
I have always been dreaming
Has finally come true
That dream
I have always believed in
I have found it in you

Many seasons have changed
Since the day the dreaming started
I had loved in vain
The dream left me broken hearted

Million tears have fallen
All of them have turned to nothing
I had my heart calling
But I never found that special something

That special something called love
When too much is never enough

(chorus)
The only dream that never shattered
When my heart was broken in two
The only dream that ever mattered
Was finding a love so true
That dream
I have always been dreaming
Has finally come true
That dream
I have always believed in
I have found it in you]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club ImpossiblePrincess https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/in-dreams/#post-6140