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The chorus reads a little long, although with music I could be wrong.
this song is pretty much suposta' be one of those calm songs I guess you mean a ballad?
Its always better when theres heavy breathing Not quite sure of this line. I get a really nice image through the whole song about love and romance and this part kinda struck me as "lustfull" more than romantic. If that's what you're aiming for, then it's all good.

Happy writing, G.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club rocketgirl https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/in-your-eyes/#post-151947 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/in-your-eyes/#post-14604 Sat, 14 Jan 2006 03:12:03 +0000
(Verse 1)
My words always come the wrong way out
Can you blame me? your all I want
So its about time I started to close my mouth
And speak with my heart

(Bridge)
My heart can't stop this beating
Its always better when theres heavy breathing
Pain lifts off the shoulder, Everytime you come closer
This moments what I've been waiting for all along

(Chorus)
When the sun falls down and fades away
And the moon lights up the night in the sky
A falling star will burn inside my heart
As I loose myself falling in your eyes
I need you more then anything else
We could Jump of the edge together
You and I all alone by ourselves
I only wish these dreams would last forever

(Verse 2)
Waking up is a nightmare come to life
All I need is you tonight
And all I'm thinking of is you
Falling in your eyes

(Bridge)
My heart can't stop this beating
Its always better when theres heavy breathing
Pain lifts off the shoulder, Everytime you come closer
This moments what I've been waiting for all along

(Chorus)
When the sun falls down and fades away
And the moon lights up the night in the sky
A falling star will burn inside my heart
As I loose myself falling in your eyes
I need you more then anything else
We could Jump of the edge together
You and I all alone by ourselves
I only wish these dreams would last forever

(Middle)
Falling in your eyes
Falling in your eyes
Falling in your beautiful eyes

(Chorus)
When the sun falls down and fades away
And the moon lights up the night in the sky
A falling star will burn inside my heart
As I loose myself falling in your eyes
I need you more then anything else
We could Jump of the edge together
You and I all alone by ourselves
I only wish these dreams would last forever]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club youngrawker https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/in-your-eyes/#post-14604