https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/insane-2/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 23:01:29 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/insane-2/#post-335230 Mon, 27 Jul 2009 13:09:18 +0000 Both variants are correct - it is absolutely correct to say that I never have mistakes in my writings as well as that I never make mistakes when writing. I mean exactly what I say. And your sarcasm, or your completely incorrent and incoherent sentence, whatever it is, is simply irrelevant here. From this thread.... https://www.guitarnoise.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=22&t=40434&start=15

Incorrent?

:D :D :D

Vic]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/insane-2/#post-335230 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/insane-2/#post-335226 Mon, 27 Jul 2009 12:35:01 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/insane-2/#post-335226 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/insane-2/#post-335010 Fri, 24 Jul 2009 13:21:22 +0000
Vic]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/insane-2/#post-335010 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/insane-2/#post-335007 Fri, 24 Jul 2009 12:07:43 +0000 2. I never have mistakes concerning grammar or word choice - I'm a linguist.
3. If you're not capable of getting to the core of the writing and revealing its sense, it's not my problem. If a writer is really talented, the sense of his or her words never lies on the surface.
Period.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/insane-2/#post-335007 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/insane-2/#post-334417 Sat, 18 Jul 2009 06:19:17 +0000
All we need is love, peace and understanding then ... :wink:]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Blue Jay https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/insane-2/#post-334417 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/insane-2/#post-334415 Sat, 18 Jul 2009 05:53:54 +0000 even when the comment points out an obvious mistake in the wording. But I'm not going to rehash all of that.

I am reluctant to make comments on her lyrics because they are dismissed in a very condescending and flippant manner.
However, I will say that of all her lyrics she's posted within the last year, this one is quite singable.
I can hear the rhythm as I read it.

And yes, BlueJay, the line doesn't make sense.
What ABD says she is trying to say is not expressed by that line. But I'm afraid you are not going to convince her of that.
It's clear in her mind what she is saying but it's not too clear to me and, apparently, not to you.

I guess what she is trying to say is that she hopes he doesn't see that she is trying to break off the relationship and hopes he doesn't see the reasons for her breaking it off. But I'm not too sure because even her reply . . .where she attempts to explain what she means . . . is not clear to me . . . "their beloved"? . . . is there more than one of her loving him?
But the line, "Hope you don't understand it" certainly doesn't impart all of that to me.
But in her own words "It's too complicated for my plain mindset." And I do have a plain mind . . .
and she does have her mind set . . . and from past experience you will not be able to convince her otherwise.

I look forward . . . in years to come . . . when she will be more accepting of comments and actually thank you . . . for taking the time to read and to respond. That would be the civil thing to do.
And then maybe . . . even many more years later . . . she will actually accept comments and incorporate some of the constructive feedback to improve her poetry.
But I'm a Pisces . . . and we are dreamers.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club KR2 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/insane-2/#post-334415 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/insane-2/#post-334401 Sat, 18 Jul 2009 04:11:34 +0000
There are some people who can't be told anything, because they already know everything - even if they're only nineteen or twenty years old. Oooh, a whole life's worth of experience! My advice, don't waste your time, mate....you just can't put bad poetry to music, in the same way you can't make a silk purse out of a sow's ear....

:D :D :D

Vic]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/insane-2/#post-334401 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/insane-2/#post-334297 Fri, 17 Jul 2009 11:20:04 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/insane-2/#post-334297 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/insane-2/#post-333920 Mon, 13 Jul 2009 19:43:43 +0000
I wondered if you meant "You're better off confused", "You're better off without a clue" or "Hope you don't feel as I do". :)]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Blue Jay https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/insane-2/#post-333920 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/insane-2/#post-36566 Wed, 08 Jul 2009 10:29:16 +0000 And I've disappeared - without a trace,
Without a sound, without a sign,
As you'll never care. Well, dear, it's fine.
I left half to midnight for reasons unknown
To make half the way to nowhere by dawn.
I come back to earth or I drown in your eyes -
Oh well, I've decided.

I'm trying to flee
To weaken the ties
Before I get sober,
Before I think twice.
I can't justify it, I'll never explain
Why something desired brings so much pain.
It's my turn to quit,
Hope you don't understand it.

This theme is forbidden, and so is my song.
Your arms are somewhere I'll never belong.
It's too complicated for my plain mindset.
I've given up something I won't ever get.
My thoughts are immoral, my thoughts are profane,
I save you from me - I'm becoming insane.
I quit this false game, or I break all the rules.
Oh well, I've decided.

I'm trying to flee
To weaken the ties
Before I get sober,
Before I think twice.
I can't justify it, I'll never explain
Why something desired brings so much pain.
It's my turn to quit,
Hope you don't understand it.

I think no one knows what I'm getting at -
You don't know to whom all these words have been said.
I just press "escape" - you won't see me again.
I think I've decided - I'm not that insane.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/insane-2/#post-36566