https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/latest-song/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 09:05:30 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/latest-song/#post-315580 Sun, 07 Dec 2008 00:08:25 +0000 FYI - I said it was in C but that is only relative to the capo which is on the second fret. So, it is actually in D.
Enjoy.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club rcsnydley#1 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/latest-song/#post-315580 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/latest-song/#post-315431 Fri, 05 Dec 2008 01:29:31 +0000
I am not a good singer - or a good guitar player. But I did give it a try, and just found that to be the point where I had modify it a bit.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club huricane https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/latest-song/#post-315431 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/latest-song/#post-315401 Thu, 04 Dec 2008 17:36:48 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club rcsnydley#1 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/latest-song/#post-315401 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/latest-song/#post-315372 Thu, 04 Dec 2008 08:27:56 +0000
Sounds pretty Kenny Rogers-ish without actually listening to what your ideas are for the sound.

Are the lines underneath the chorus part of it as well, or is that a sort of bridge, it seems that those lines would go well with the chorus each time throughout the song.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club JoeHempel https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/latest-song/#post-315372 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/latest-song/#post-315342 Wed, 03 Dec 2008 23:12:02 +0000 Thanks for the input, it is always appreciated.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club rcsnydley#1 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/latest-song/#post-315342 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/latest-song/#post-315290 Wed, 03 Dec 2008 08:19:07 +0000
I feel lost now with no way
to find relief in the past
that I'll never see again
Tried to hold on to one day
slipped away it won't last
and it never came again I could make the last 3 lines work by adding

*it slipped away, it wont last*
*and it will never come again*

But that is me putting a tune to it.

Not sure about the fourth. It could work]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club huricane https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/latest-song/#post-315290 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/latest-song/#post-34242 Wed, 03 Dec 2008 06:13:28 +0000
Let Me Go ©R. Steffen 2008

I went down to the city
I lost track of the time
that I'll never know again

Of her life all's the pity
she got lost in the time

and we'll never speak again

Chorus:
Send her a rose
Send her some wine
Send her away
but keep her in mind

Play me a song that you wrote long ago
take the worries from my mind
let me go

I feel lost now with no way
to find relief in the past
that I'll never see again
Tried to hold on to one day
slipped away it won't last
and it never came again

Chorus: me (in place of her)

Sometimes in the morning
when dreams hover nearby
that we'll never touch again
I took that as a warning
rose and uttered a sigh
and I tried to love again

Chorus: her

take the worries from my mind
let me go]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club rcsnydley#1 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/latest-song/#post-34242