https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/long-time-coming/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 07:10:44 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/long-time-coming/#post-87277 Sat, 29 Jan 2005 01:38:12 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club DillyDally https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/long-time-coming/#post-87277 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/long-time-coming/#post-87272 Sat, 29 Jan 2005 01:22:36 +0000
when will it be finished ?]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club XXXX https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/long-time-coming/#post-87272 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/long-time-coming/#post-85749 Wed, 19 Jan 2005 14:07:06 +0000
:P :D 8)]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club lotto king https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/long-time-coming/#post-85749 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/long-time-coming/#post-85689 Wed, 19 Jan 2005 04:02:42 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club +LostBeggining+ https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/long-time-coming/#post-85689 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/long-time-coming/#post-85660 Wed, 19 Jan 2005 01:11:17 +0000
You said "you was being sarcastic just cuz i really dont think my lyrics deserve anywhere near that kinda compliment "

Well I think you do , and I'm NOT BEING sarcastic , just take the compliment and finish this wonderful piece .

Even Hilch thinks it's damn good he wrote "serious I hope I loved it "

Must be good please finish this and post the final out come

cheers

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:D :D :D]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/long-time-coming/#post-85656 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/long-time-coming/#post-85553 Tue, 18 Jan 2005 14:34:01 +0000

I cant really get a grip on a chorus :S....really need some help with this one]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club +LostBeggining+ https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/long-time-coming/#post-85553 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/long-time-coming/#post-85551 Tue, 18 Jan 2005 14:18:29 +0000
What a beautiful start WOW I was having all these lovey dovey emotions running through me as I read this , great start will be looking out for this one being finished .

As usual your writting is truely wonderful and I am just wrapped that you post so many wonderful lyrics and lines .

great work

cheers

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not enough smiley faces here]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club lotto king https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/long-time-coming/#post-85551 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/long-time-coming/#post-6442 Tue, 18 Jan 2005 13:47:09 +0000
Long time coming

V
The wind blows through the open window
And surrounds us as we lay
I pressed my hand against your skin
And we begin to feel the rain
I breath in your deepest beauty
As i feel the room fade away
And we float high upon this moment
Hoping not to come down again

C
Id give up everything
Just to be here with you
Cuz forever is nothing
When my life was made for you

V
The beauty burns inside your eyes
And it freezes up my heart
And it feels like there is nothing
That could ever pull us apart
But even if that is just a dream
Then i will never stay awake
Cuz these are the times i feel alive
And your in every breath I take

B
Your emerald worlds
They stop me in my heart
The love you give me
Reflects just how beautiful you are]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club +LostBeggining+ https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/long-time-coming/#post-6442