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What I'll try and do is a quick recording of just guitar so people can get an idea of what it sounds like, I'll post it soon.

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I know it doesn't look right on paper, but I guess the judges knew it was probably something like what I've described above.

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The competition was the 'Festival of Original Music Song Competition 2005 (Lyrics Section)'.

Judge 1: Well paced, interesting lyrics, which flow easily. This song has the potential to become a popular 'wedding song'. I like it a lot, I can hear the music and some rich golden voice singing! Jude 2: Good blunt, to the point, set of lyrics. I can't quite work out as to how the 'double chorus' at the end would enhance the song. Stick to the one - that's what a chorus is all about - and you'll have the audience singing along with it, in their minds. Here's the lyrics:

Love Will…
Copyright © 2005 Peter John King

(Verse 1)
Would you like to see
All my special qualities?
Please don't deny it
But when you find out
They are way too profound
You better say
You better say it out loud

(Bridge)
And all this time
I've been wishing that you
That you were my bride
Cos everyone knows
That you ‘ought to show
What it takes
To get through the night
That you finally realise

(Chorus)
Love will take you by the hand
Show you what you can stand
Love will show you what to see
Show you how to believe
Love, Love, Love

(Verse 2)
Would you like to be
All the things that you have dreamed?
You won't deny it
But when you find out
They are too far away
You better not run
You better not run away

(Repeat Bridge)

(Repeat Chorus)

(Middle)
Love, Love, Love, Love will
Love, Love, Love, Love will
Love, Love, Love, Love will
Love, Love, Love will

(Middle 2 - Acoustic using Chorus chords, build-up to Chorus)

(Chorus 2)
Love will take you by the hand
Show you what you can stand
Love will show you what to see
Show you how to believe

(Repeat Chorus 2)

(Chorus 3)
Love will tell you what to bring
Tell you that you can sing
Love will seem just like a gun
It can hurt anyone
Love will be such a blast
If you let go a trust in me

(Outro)


In relation to the comments made by 'Judge 2', I agree, I don't know why I put in the chorus at the end, I just thought that you know how some songs have some different lyrics at the end and then fade out. That's the effect I was going for and that's why I've got 'Repeat Chorus 2' which is the main chorus and then 'Chorus 3'. Maybe I should have marked 'Chorus 3' as the 'Outro'.

Does anyone agree or disagree with the Judges or have and comments about the song.

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