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                        <title>RE: My First Song</title>
                        <link>https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-first-song-3/#post-182978</link>
                        <pubDate>Mon, 12 Jun 2006 08:37:18 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[Its a song, sure its simple but most good songs are.  For a first its alright.  Just keep the chords simple and have a nice melody and it would be great.]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[Its a song, sure its simple but most good songs are.  For a first its alright.  Just keep the chords simple and have a nice melody and it would be great.]]></content:encoded>
						                            <category domain="https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/">Guitar Noise Songwriting Club</category>                        <dc:creator>mstrymn</dc:creator>
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                        <title>RE: My First Song</title>
                        <link>https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-first-song-3/#post-181862</link>
                        <pubDate>Tue, 06 Jun 2006 13:30:30 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[Ya know, these lyrics kind of remind me of Franz Ferdinand&#039;s &quot;Michael&quot;... just not as provocative and sexual. It&#039;s actually kind of cool that you twisted it into a girl&#039;s point of view. I li...]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[Ya know, these lyrics kind of remind me of Franz Ferdinand's "Michael"... just not as provocative and sexual. It's actually kind of cool that you twisted it into a girl's point of view. I like it. Of course, I'm kind of new as lyric writing too, so I don't have much to critique.  :oops:

i got the same kind of feeling when reading it  through, its a nice song put it to music and it should sound good]]></content:encoded>
						                            <category domain="https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/">Guitar Noise Songwriting Club</category>                        <dc:creator>Cha$e</dc:creator>
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                        <title>RE: My First Song</title>
                        <link>https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-first-song-3/#post-181718</link>
                        <pubDate>Tue, 06 Jun 2006 01:10:23 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[Sorry for the double post. Now that I just did that, sorry for the triple post.]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[Sorry for the double post.<br> <br>Now that I just did that, sorry for the triple post.]]></content:encoded>
						                            <category domain="https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/">Guitar Noise Songwriting Club</category>                        <dc:creator>the24factorsofseandonovan</dc:creator>
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                        <title>RE: My First Song</title>
                        <link>https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-first-song-3/#post-181715</link>
                        <pubDate>Tue, 06 Jun 2006 01:07:18 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[Ya know, these lyrics kind of remind me of Franz Ferdinand&#039;s &quot;Michael&quot;... just not as provocative and sexual. It&#039;s actually kind of cool that you twisted it into a girl&#039;s point of view. I li...]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[Ya know, these lyrics kind of remind me of Franz Ferdinand's "Michael"... just not as provocative and sexual. It's actually kind of cool that you twisted it into a girl's point of view. I like it. Of course, I'm kind of new as lyric writing too, so I don't have much to critique.  :oops:]]></content:encoded>
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                        <title>RE: My First Song</title>
                        <link>https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-first-song-3/#post-181714</link>
                        <pubDate>Tue, 06 Jun 2006 01:06:59 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[Ya know, these lyrics kind of remind me of Franz Ferdinand&#039;s &quot;Michael&quot;... just not as provocative and sexual. It&#039;s actually kind of cool that you twisted it into a girl&#039;s point of view. I li...]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[Ya know, these lyrics kind of remind me of Franz Ferdinand's "Michael"... just not as provocative and sexual. It's actually kind of cool that you twisted it into a girl's point of view. I like it. Of course, I'm kind of new as lyric writing too, so I don't have much to critique.]]></content:encoded>
						                            <category domain="https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/">Guitar Noise Songwriting Club</category>                        <dc:creator>the24factorsofseandonovan</dc:creator>
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                        <title>My First Song</title>
                        <link>https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-first-song-3/#post-18165</link>
                        <pubDate>Fri, 02 Jun 2006 23:25:27 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[I wrote this song and although it contains only basic chords, it sounds ok.  Hopefully gonna do some more...                                   POORHOUSE BOYI MET A BOY TODAY AND HE TOOK MY B...]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[I wrote this song and although it contains only basic chords, it sounds ok.  Hopefully gonna do some more...<br>                                   POORHOUSE BOY<br><br>I MET A BOY TODAY <br>AND HE TOOK MY BREATH AWAY<br>HIS FACE WAS LIKE THE SUNSHINE<br>WHEN HE SMILED<br>AND IT CAME TO ME<br>THAT I DON'T WANNA BE FREE<br>I'D RATHER BE A PRISONER IN HIS LIFE...<br><br>chorus<br><br>HE'S ALL I'VE EVER WANTED<br>AND ALL I'VE EVER NEEDED<br>HE'S ALL I'VE EVER LONGED FOR...<br><br>WE SAW EACH OTHER EVERY DAY<br>AND THE YEARS THEY JUST FLOATED AWAY<br>I'VE NEVER BEEN SO HAPPY<br>I COULD CRY....<br><br>THEN THINGS JUST CHANGED<br>WE WENT OUR SEPERATE WAYS<br>LEFT ME ALL ALONE AND WONDERING<br>WHY...<br><br>chorus<br><br>HE WAS ALL I EVER WANTED<br>AND ALL I EVER NEEDED<br>AND ALL I EVER LONGED FOR...<br><br>I HOPE TO SEE THAT BOY AGAIN AND<br>I HOPE THAT WE CAN BE FRIENDS<br>BUT I GUESS IT'S JUST A DREAM JUST<br>PASSING BY.....<br><br>bridge<br><br>I WONDER WHAT EVER HAPPENED<br>TO THAT POORHOUSE BOY<br>I WONDER IF HE THINKS OF ME<br>AT ALL...<br><br><br>I know it probably sounds a bit gay 'cos I'm a boy, but I've tried changing it to 'girl' in the lyrics and to be honest it just doesn't sound right.  Wish I knew how to do tab so you could get the gist of how the song sounds - i'm sure you'd like it.]]></content:encoded>
						                            <category domain="https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/">Guitar Noise Songwriting Club</category>                        <dc:creator>Dylan6776</dc:creator>
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