https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-new-song-opinions-please/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 09:07:42 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-new-song-opinions-please/#post-118678 Thu, 18 Aug 2005 23:24:30 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-new-song-opinions-please/#post-118678 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-new-song-opinions-please/#post-10886 Fri, 12 Aug 2005 00:41:21 +0000 it seemed like a lot to take
so i'll spend today waiting for the scars to heal
even though the scars are fake

i hear the song across the universe
it's floating through my head
but the melody's played in reverse
and my eyes are painted red

everyone talks about the news
but noone seems to care
they try so hard to get their message through
but a message is just air

chorus
i can't take it anymore
help me tear it down
i can't take it anymore
the bombs keep coming down

this took me about 6 minutes to write... i didn't have anything in mind when i started... i have practice in 20 minutes so i'll have to try to fit it to music.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-new-song-opinions-please/#post-10886