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I definately like glorify the "Son" better!

And going back to the line...

He is the only one
who deserves your noise

I really like that line.

Psalm 100:1 says "Make a joyful noise to the Lord, all the lands."

Psalm 98:4-6 says. Make a joyful noise unto the Lord, all the earth; make a loud noise, and rejoice, and sing praise.

Just my thought on it, but your audience will relate to the imagery of noice. Plus I think it's cooler than We want to rejoice line. Not that that's not good too..

Just a thought...

Keep up the good writing!]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club gmilam https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-song-fanatic/#post-64538 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-song-fanatic/#post-62418 Wed, 16 Jun 2004 07:56:02 +0000
I would change "Glorify the Son" to "Glorify the One".
Sounds better to me, and is a bit more powerful.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club MJBird https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-song-fanatic/#post-62418 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-song-fanatic/#post-62414 Wed, 16 Jun 2004 05:56:06 +0000
We stand on the stage
hands raised to the sky
you're looking to us
but i don't know why

Chorus:
you scream
but do you really see
the people on the stage
you think we're all the rage
but we're not
our next song might flop

We're people like you
Not the chosen one
Don't glorify us
Glorify the son

Chorus

He is the only one
we want to rejoice
who deserves this love
so raise up your voice


chorus]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club ruepickle https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-song-fanatic/#post-62414 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-song-fanatic/#post-62409 Wed, 16 Jun 2004 05:20:54 +0000 How about something like this for the 2nd verse

We're people like you
Not the chosen one
Don't glorify us
Glorify the son]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Tokai 12 String https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-song-fanatic/#post-62409 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-song-fanatic/#post-62394 Tue, 15 Jun 2004 23:27:08 +0000
ok, second verse needs work. . .

how about

Just because we stand on stage
does not mean we are the One
why do you glorify us
Glorify the Son

Chorus

He is the only one
we want to rejoice
who deserves this love
so raise up your voice


that any better? i'm struggling on getting the second verse changed. . .]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club ruepickle https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-song-fanatic/#post-62394 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-song-fanatic/#post-62375 Tue, 15 Jun 2004 18:45:31 +0000 - maybe something like "rejoice" to keep the rhyme with "voice"

- anyways, nice job!!!]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club P0RR https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-song-fanatic/#post-62375 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-song-fanatic/#post-62363 Tue, 15 Jun 2004 13:53:06 +0000
If so, I think the second verse needs a rehash to make it less "we're not worthy"; and I have my doubts about "noise" in the last verse, but can't think of anything better right now.

If not, then I've missed the point completely.


A :-)]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Alan Green https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-song-fanatic/#post-62363 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-song-fanatic/#post-2638 Tue, 15 Jun 2004 02:08:57 +0000 hands raised to the sky
you're looking to us
but i don't know why

Chorus:
you scream
but do you really see
the people on the stage
you think we're all the rage
but we're not
our next song might flop

we're people like you
no bigger than anyone
why do you glorify us
Glorify the Son

Chorus

He is the only one
who deserves your noise
who deserves this love
so raise up your voice

chorus]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club ruepickle https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/my-song-fanatic/#post-2638