https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/nothing-feels-the-same/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 01:12:23 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/nothing-feels-the-same/#post-88856 Tue, 08 Feb 2005 14:21:21 +0000
you wrote

"(chorus)
Now everything has changed
And nothing feels the same
Don't know what is happening
Miss the joy you used to bring
Everything has changed
Nothing feels the same "

I thought

"Don't know what is happening
Miss the joy you used to bring
Don't know what is happening
Miss the joy you used to bring


just my opion there but the other lines to me just seem to be repeating what you have already said


Hope you don't mind

Cheers

L.K :arrow:]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club lotto king https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/nothing-feels-the-same/#post-88856 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/nothing-feels-the-same/#post-88813 Tue, 08 Feb 2005 03:49:25 +0000 the other alternative, where you keep the long chorus, is to ensure it stay interesting, by changinh the melody slightly for the second set of four lines (particular lines 5th and 6th lines). I even thought if you perhaps got rid of line 5 or six, and stretched out the line you left to cover the same amount of time (ie sing the melody at half the speed) it would keep the chorus intersting.

just some ideas, dunno if they will help.
cheers
sozay]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club sozay https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/nothing-feels-the-same/#post-88813 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/nothing-feels-the-same/#post-88793 Tue, 08 Feb 2005 00:32:29 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club ImpossiblePrincess https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/nothing-feels-the-same/#post-88793 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/nothing-feels-the-same/#post-85863 Thu, 20 Jan 2005 12:18:53 +0000
this is really good at first I thought your chorus was too long but after reading it several times it suited the song more and more , well done
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cheers
L.K]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club lotto king https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/nothing-feels-the-same/#post-85863 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/nothing-feels-the-same/#post-6482 Thu, 20 Jan 2005 01:07:47 +0000 All day long, for me to take
We used to have so much fun
But something's been going on
We used to talk all night
Now just worries on your mind
It seems like you're always occupied

Wish I could lift your senses
Wish I could make it better
However I try, it's never right
Whatever I do, it's just no use

(chorus)
Don't know what is happening
Miss the joy you used to bring
Now everything has changed
And nothing feels the same
Don't know what is going on
Don't know what I'm doing wrong
Everything has changed
Nothing feels the same

Used to smile when you saw my face
Every time you looked my way
We used to play any game
A new one for each new day
We used to walk the park
Hand in hand, heart to heart
But it seems now we're worlds apart

Wish I could lift your senses
Wish I could make it better
However I try, it's never right
Whatever I do, it's just no use

(chorus)
Don't know what is happening
Miss the joy you used to bring
Now everything has changed
And nothing feels the same
Don't know what is going on
Don't know what I'm doing wrong
Everything has changed
Nothing feels the same]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club ImpossiblePrincess https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/nothing-feels-the-same/#post-6482