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good job
:) Portia]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Portia https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/open-book/#post-191455 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/open-book/#post-188823 Wed, 12 Jul 2006 08:05:10 +0000
Cool lyrics!

Looking forward to hearing it.

Margaret]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club margaret https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/open-book/#post-188823 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/open-book/#post-186276 Wed, 28 Jun 2006 19:18:50 +0000
I really like the bridge...the chorus is great too.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club nolongerme https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/open-book/#post-186276 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/open-book/#post-185462 Sun, 25 Jun 2006 01:41:35 +0000
I don't have chords at this point, although I have in mind a punk-ish sounding, greenday/offspring/blink182 kinda vibe.

Im hoping to get some alone time with the electric tomorrow, so I'll see what happens then........

Pete]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/open-book/#post-185462 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/open-book/#post-185456 Sun, 25 Jun 2006 01:33:33 +0000
very impressive do you have chords mate ?]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/open-book/#post-185456 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/open-book/#post-18676 Sun, 25 Jun 2006 01:25:15 +0000
Verse1

You make me crazy with the.…
The shine of your hair
You drive me insane with your….
Your longing, brown-eyed stare

Bridge

But there's something
About you
That I can't
Place my finger on

It's a secret
That you've kept
Bottled inside
For just too long

Chorus

But now I see right through you
Straight past your eyes
And you don't have a clue

You think that I can't read you
Like an open book
Now I know the truth

Now I know the…

Verse 2

Past behind you is gone..
Gone but not forgotten now
Why don't you let your guard down?
Why is it so wrong to care?

Bridge

But there's something
About you
That I can't
Place my finger on

It's a secret
That you've kept
Bottled inside
For just too long

Chorus

But now I see right through you
Straight past your eyes
And you don't have a clue

You think that I can't read you
Like an open book
Now I know the truth

Now I know the truth
Now I know the….

Bridge 2
The feeling cold inside
Is freezing over your pride
But you no longer have to hide

Chorus

‘Cos now I see right through you
Straight past your eyes
And you don't have a clue

You think that I can't read you
Like an open book
But now I know the truth

Like an open book
But now I know the truth

Like an open book
But now I know the

Truth.

Pete :)]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/open-book/#post-18676