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I agree w/ them, as I've already told you. We still have to compose our songs one night. My place or yours, I don't care. We should also take BNA's advise and try to put it into a certain order. You know, try to put it in a story or something.

Oh, and I'm just kiding. You're not my friend. :D]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club pierson https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/pessimest/#post-82871 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/pessimest/#post-81323 Fri, 24 Dec 2004 16:07:52 +0000

maybe if you broke your lines up a bit they might work better?
such as :
Trying to find my way through
cause I'm blinded by the smoke
that gets in my face,
covering my life's disgrace.
Wrath of pain,
not justified,
the only thing I can say is I always tried.
Crying each day a way.
Into a layer of sorrow.
Black as the day the earth was born,
everything seems to fade
away as long as I have the sorrow.

just an idea

thats my 5 cents worth

cheers]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club lotto king https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/pessimest/#post-81323 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/pessimest/#post-81314 Fri, 24 Dec 2004 15:11:42 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club guitargeek https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/pessimest/#post-81314 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/pessimest/#post-5809 Fri, 24 Dec 2004 07:40:53 +0000
Pessimist

Trying to find my way through cause I'm blinded by the smoke that gets in my face, covering my life's disgrace.
Wrath of pain, not justified, the only thing I can say is I always tried.
Crying each day a way. Into a layer of sorrow. Black as the day the earth was born, everything seems to fade away as long as I have the sorrow.

RF. Cause I'm fighting it
Cause I don't wanna die
Cause I don't wanna be
It's not like I have a choice
To be this catastrophe
Hiding all my pain
in this covenant
This shadow of sorrow.

The pain gets to me more each day.
My friends are fading into my enemies.
Hurtful words that never go away, staying in my brain growing inside like a tumor that feeds on hate.
My senses they fail me telling me I'm ok. I'm feeling so broken, so faded away.
Chorus

And in my mind
in it I do confide
all this pain and agony I hide inside.
Since I was born I've wanted to die,

I can't decipher my visions
Depression, obsession, angst, and spar
Fate never ending but always going to far
Chorus

This is my cry for help]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club spug https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/pessimest/#post-5809