https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/piercing-the-darkness/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 07:11:57 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/piercing-the-darkness/#post-134478 Mon, 24 Oct 2005 18:21:31 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club nolongerme https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/piercing-the-darkness/#post-134478 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/piercing-the-darkness/#post-134139 Sat, 22 Oct 2005 09:14:40 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club onegirlrevolution https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/piercing-the-darkness/#post-134139 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/piercing-the-darkness/#post-133935 Fri, 21 Oct 2005 04:04:14 +0000
thanks]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club nolongerme https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/piercing-the-darkness/#post-133935 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/piercing-the-darkness/#post-133814 Thu, 20 Oct 2005 14:19:26 +0000
Anyway, I thought the song was great.You'd begin to understand
Where my thoughts are at
And why I hold your handI loved that part. The words really captured what you were trying to say. Keep it up!]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club pierson https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/piercing-the-darkness/#post-133814 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/piercing-the-darkness/#post-132402 Fri, 14 Oct 2005 04:38:35 +0000 :D]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club nolongerme https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/piercing-the-darkness/#post-132402 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/piercing-the-darkness/#post-12397 Tue, 11 Oct 2005 20:20:32 +0000 I think i need to rewrite the chorus to fit the rest.

Piercing The Darkness

If you could feel my heart beat
You would know the reason why
That my heart skips
When you look me in the eyes

If you could think my thoughts
You'd begin to understand
Where my thoughts are at
And why I hold your hand


You're here piercing the darkness
Bringing light to my life
Loving me at all times
Changing the way I live life

If you saw what I see
Then you could close your eyes
You would see you and me
Saying goodbyes



If you feared what I fear
You would know why I cry
It's the thought of you leaving
And saying goodbye

If you saw what I see
You could close your eyes



If you saw what I see
You could close your eyes
You would see you and me
We're saying goodbyes :D :D :D]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club nolongerme https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/piercing-the-darkness/#post-12397