https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/putting-lyrics-into-music-help-please/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 22:45:03 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/putting-lyrics-into-music-help-please/#post-65505 Thu, 19 Aug 2004 08:56:41 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club E.Sherman https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/putting-lyrics-into-music-help-please/#post-65505 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/putting-lyrics-into-music-help-please/#post-65483 Thu, 19 Aug 2004 04:26:33 +0000 I'm alive on the outside
but dead underneath,

Let me take you round
let me bring you down
breathing is hard with eyes closed

Got to get out of this hole,
There are things I could say
I could sing you a song
I've got every thing that you could want

So darling believe me when I say
to you you're the next best thing in this life
that's true

You are like a summer rose
but your smile wears thin
can you heal the scar that's on my heart
dry the tears I've cried whilst we were apart

Lets find away for a better day
meet me by the bridge
I'm alive on the outside but dead underneath

Let me take you round let me bring you down
breathing is hard with eyes closed
Got to get out of this hole

Knowing where you are going makes me feel guilty
but brings me peace
Desire makes me feel ugly
but brings me relief

Everybody loves somebody in this world
know one wants to grow old alone
love is you, So darling believe me
you're the best thing in this life thats true


I didn't add anything or change anything, NOW I can read it. Hope you don't mind the arranging (may be off, but easier to read).]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Sigil https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/putting-lyrics-into-music-help-please/#post-65483 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/putting-lyrics-into-music-help-please/#post-64322 Sun, 01 Aug 2004 09:47:14 +0000
Overall though I would be proud If I where the one who wrote it.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club guy_d https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/putting-lyrics-into-music-help-please/#post-64322 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/putting-lyrics-into-music-help-please/#post-63969 Tue, 27 Jul 2004 02:22:33 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Omega https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/putting-lyrics-into-music-help-please/#post-63969 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/putting-lyrics-into-music-help-please/#post-61376 Fri, 28 May 2004 21:29:32 +0000 I'm good making music, but not making lyrics...
It could be a nice mix :D

I hope your nick its an Oasis quote, isn't it? this is my favourite song... and I play it hundreds of times... it's simply.. nice!]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club noel-iu https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/putting-lyrics-into-music-help-please/#post-61376 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/putting-lyrics-into-music-help-please/#post-61326 Fri, 28 May 2004 04:07:09 +0000
Your song has very long lines, they're hard to work with, you can try loosening up the guitar line, maybe to a walking bassline feel, and try speaking the words, more than singing them]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Snoogans775 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/putting-lyrics-into-music-help-please/#post-61326 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/putting-lyrics-into-music-help-please/#post-60932 Wed, 19 May 2004 05:27:42 +0000
Jingle Bells,Jingle Bells , Jingle all the WAY
Oh what fun it is to ride on a one horse open SLEIGH. ("way" and "sleigh" rhyme.)

Jesus Loves Me,this I KNOW
For the Bible tells me SO.

Twinkle twinkle little STAR
How I wonder what you ARE

Mattie told Hattie about a thing she SAW
It had one big horn and a woolly JAW

see?

http://www.guitarforsongwriters.com]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club garytalley https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/putting-lyrics-into-music-help-please/#post-60932 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/putting-lyrics-into-music-help-please/#post-60673 Wed, 12 May 2004 20:51:57 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/putting-lyrics-into-music-help-please/#post-60673 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/putting-lyrics-into-music-help-please/#post-60638 Wed, 12 May 2004 07:23:05 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club garytalley https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/putting-lyrics-into-music-help-please/#post-60638 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/putting-lyrics-into-music-help-please/#post-2391 Wed, 12 May 2004 02:48:04 +0000
On the mind

Meet me by the bridge, I'm alive on the outside but dead underneath,
Let me take you round let me bring you down; breathing is hard with eyes closed,
Got to get out of this hole,

There are things I could say I could sing you a song, I've got every thing that you could want,
So darling believe me when I say to you you're the next best thing in this life that's true.
You are like a summer rose but your smile wears thin, can you heal the scar that's on my heart, dry the tears I've cried whilst we were apart

Lets find away for a better day, meet me by the bridge I'm alive on the outside but dead underneath,
Let me take you round let me bring you down; breathing is hard with eyes closed,
Got to get out of this hole,

Knowing where you are going makes me feel guilty but brings me peace,
Desire makes me feel ugly but brings me relief
Everybody loves somebody in this world, know one wants to grow old alone, love is you, So darling believe me, you're the best thing in this life that's true]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/putting-lyrics-into-music-help-please/#post-2391