https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/relationships-fall-like-cards/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 02:24:37 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/relationships-fall-like-cards/#post-147354 Thu, 29 Dec 2005 04:58:35 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club nolongerme https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/relationships-fall-like-cards/#post-147354 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/relationships-fall-like-cards/#post-147265 Wed, 28 Dec 2005 21:11:07 +0000
Now someone else is showing me wealth
Promising me happiness and health

instead of 'happiness and health' for some reason i had in my head 'Promising me happiness in sickness and in health'
maybe its a bit long though but just something for you to consider

Good job anyway]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Picture-Perfect https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/relationships-fall-like-cards/#post-147265 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/relationships-fall-like-cards/#post-147137 Wed, 28 Dec 2005 05:26:57 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club nolongerme https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/relationships-fall-like-cards/#post-147137 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/relationships-fall-like-cards/#post-143967 Mon, 12 Dec 2005 17:53:46 +0000
i'll try to get it up tomorrow!

:):)]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club nolongerme https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/relationships-fall-like-cards/#post-143967 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/relationships-fall-like-cards/#post-143852 Sun, 11 Dec 2005 19:39:17 +0000
hey grate lyrics I like what mike said about the joker that would sit well
also consider the ending of you song in your tuchup
I think it could use some tweeking to go out smoother
anyway just a thought good luck :D

Mystic :wink:]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club mysticmoonangel https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/relationships-fall-like-cards/#post-143852 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/relationships-fall-like-cards/#post-143738 Sun, 11 Dec 2005 02:57:32 +0000
:)]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Ghost https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/relationships-fall-like-cards/#post-143738 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/relationships-fall-like-cards/#post-143716 Sun, 11 Dec 2005 02:01:55 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club nolongerme https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/relationships-fall-like-cards/#post-143716 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/relationships-fall-like-cards/#post-143714 Sun, 11 Dec 2005 01:54:55 +0000
I think you really nailed down the scene very well.

Great job!

Mike]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Mike https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/relationships-fall-like-cards/#post-143714 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/relationships-fall-like-cards/#post-143713 Sun, 11 Dec 2005 01:49:39 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club nolongerme https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/relationships-fall-like-cards/#post-143713 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/relationships-fall-like-cards/#post-143707 Sun, 11 Dec 2005 01:41:41 +0000
Now there's something better and I'm a no one
I was fooled by voice and promise of fun I was just the joker with no hand or fun...... (or something like that).

Just a thought. I like it the was it is, but it seems like there is a slot open for that "left behind"" joker card.


Mike]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Mike https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/relationships-fall-like-cards/#post-143707