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									review - Guitar Noise Songwriting Club				            </title>
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                        <title>RE: review</title>
                        <link>https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/review/#post-197704</link>
                        <pubDate>Thu, 07 Sep 2006 22:22:16 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[You&#039;re very talented.  I have goosebumps.  One thing you might consider changing is the line &quot;in that en-darkened tomb&quot; It feels a little unnatural, maybe just use darkened.  Other than that...]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[You're very talented.  I have goosebumps.  One thing you might consider changing is the line "in that en-darkened tomb" It feels a little unnatural, maybe just use darkened.  Other than that I can't think of any criticism.  <br>-coatbutton]]></content:encoded>
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                        <title>review</title>
                        <link>https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/review/#post-19853</link>
                        <pubDate>Mon, 21 Aug 2006 09:41:09 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[FreakSince I cannot go out to see the world i will make the world look at methere are many faces that i wear which one should i let them seedo i show them my confusion when i lack faith will...]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[Freak<br><br>Since I cannot go out to see the world i will make the world look at me<br>there are many faces that i wear which one should i let them see<br>do i show them my confusion when i lack faith will they think im weak<br>i guess i should just be myself let the world behold the freak<br><br>let me tell of when i was a child<br>and the demon who perched on my roof<br>how i prayed for jesus to save me <br>and was lost when i didnt see proof<br><br>too young for him to take me <br>too innocent for his power <br>he is still the reason at five years old<br>that my faith began to sour<br><br>i know him now by name <br>i must say it to keep him weak<br>he is the demon named addiction<br>that sinks his teeth into the freak<br><br>Since I cannot go out to see the world i will make the world look at me<br>there are many faces that i wear which one should i let them see<br>do i show my anger the outgrowth of pain<br>will they think i'm weak<br>i guess i should just be myself let the world behold the freak<br><br>i still recall every hollow year<br> i spent alone in my room <br>staring at the endless ceiling<br>of that en-darkened tomb<br><br>how i tried to sell my soul<br>to escape all time and space<br>i swore the devil was a coward<br>he had yet to show his face<br><br>a guitar found my hands<br>many times my chosen friend<br>it took years to make it sound like my soul<br>but now i'm ready to begin<br><br><br>so with all of my love <br>all of my hate<br>with every sin<br>that twists my fate<br><br>with all of the joy <br>all of the sorrow<br>with every broken dream<br>that carried me tomorrow<br><br>behold the freak]]></content:encoded>
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