https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/rewrite-they-say-shes-a-lady/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 10:38:17 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/rewrite-they-say-shes-a-lady/#post-224178 Sun, 21 Jan 2007 17:23:16 +0000

thanks again for your comments, I will keep plunking away on it, i dont play an insterment or sing so well so unfortanitly there is no recording

:wink: mystic]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club mysticmoonangel https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/rewrite-they-say-shes-a-lady/#post-224178 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/rewrite-they-say-shes-a-lady/#post-224109 Sun, 21 Jan 2007 06:15:51 +0000 still it weighs heavy on her shoulders
to scared to unfold ,a past she's never told
into the shadows she crawls, another endless night
looking for the light she can not find"

That part I like a lot. The rest...eh...I'd have to hear it. But reading it, it doesn't have that outstanding flow of that line.

Good job though, song has potential.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Kevin72790 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/rewrite-they-say-shes-a-lady/#post-224109 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/rewrite-they-say-shes-a-lady/#post-224090 Sun, 21 Jan 2007 04:22:31 +0000
Very nice



Trevor]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/rewrite-they-say-shes-a-lady/#post-224090 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/rewrite-they-say-shes-a-lady/#post-224038 Sat, 20 Jan 2007 20:41:51 +0000 I think its getting better.......but let me know what you think???

:wink: mystic

THEY SAY SHES A LADY

there's a lady , a lonely lady
always living for her self
shadows filed away
neatly on the shelf

She doesn't care that your crying inside
she holds her head up high
she cant see threw the clouds in her eyes
they say she's a lady, but she ain't got no soul

she grows another year older,
still it weighs heavy on her shoulders
to scared to unfold ,a past she's never told
into the shadows she crawls, another endless night
looking for the light she can not find

She doesn't care that your crying inside
she holds her head up high
she cant see threw the clouds in her eyes
they say she's a lady, but she ain't got no soul


into the stony ground,
she takes her burdened heart
an it echoes threw my head
all the words that went unsaid
an it echoes threw my head
threw my head x3
All the word that went unsaid
AND KNOW SHE'S DEAD !!]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club mysticmoonangel https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/rewrite-they-say-shes-a-lady/#post-224038 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/rewrite-they-say-shes-a-lady/#post-222551 Sun, 14 Jan 2007 04:05:46 +0000
But its' your song ..

Trevor]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/rewrite-they-say-shes-a-lady/#post-222551 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/rewrite-they-say-shes-a-lady/#post-222348 Sat, 13 Jan 2007 08:53:42 +0000
i havent got anything solid in mind but i am thinking it might be good in a med to heavy rock but not realy sure
what would you suggest ??

:wink: mystic]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club mysticmoonangel https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/rewrite-they-say-shes-a-lady/#post-222348 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/rewrite-they-say-shes-a-lady/#post-222230 Sat, 13 Jan 2007 03:37:10 +0000 What style do you envision for this :?:
The lyrics sound good..maybe a bit of editing yet but I like the theme
like I have said, I haven't written anything good for a while, its hard to get back in th groove :oops: --ken]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club smokindog https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/rewrite-they-say-shes-a-lady/#post-222230 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/rewrite-they-say-shes-a-lady/#post-221863 Thu, 11 Jan 2007 16:14:21 +0000
well it looks you guys put me on the right track,thanks for the help, i think it reads much better, although i still feel it could end better hopefully that will come to me

:wink: mystic]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club mysticmoonangel https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/rewrite-they-say-shes-a-lady/#post-221863 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/rewrite-they-say-shes-a-lady/#post-221762 Thu, 11 Jan 2007 02:53:37 +0000
I am hearing acustic music with a nice up beat ...

Well done

Trevor]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/rewrite-they-say-shes-a-lady/#post-221762 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/rewrite-they-say-shes-a-lady/#post-23249 Wed, 10 Jan 2007 20:38:53 +0000 thanks chow for now!

:wink: mystic



THEY SAY SHES A LADY

there's a lady a lonely lady
always living for her self
shadows filed away
neatly on the shelf

She doesn't care that your crying inside
she holds her head up high
she cant see threw the clouds in her eyes
they say she's a lady, but she ain't got no soul

My oh my those shadows are old
she holds onto the past, to scared to unfold
another year older, still it weighs heavy on her shoulders
into the dark she crawls, another endless night
looking for the light she can not find

an it echoes threw my head
all the words that go un said
she proudly holds her self up high
she cant see threw the clouds in her eyes
they say she's a lady, but she ain't got no soul

she holds onto the past to scared to unfold
she grows another year older
still it weighs heavy on her shoulders
into the stony ground,
she takes her burdened heart
an it echoes threw my head
all the words that went unsaid
All the words that went unsaid]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club mysticmoonangel https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/rewrite-they-say-shes-a-lady/#post-23249