https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/slippinaway/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 07:12:02 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/slippinaway/#post-65556 Thu, 19 Aug 2004 20:34:57 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club dragona43 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/slippinaway/#post-65556 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/slippinaway/#post-65429 Wed, 18 Aug 2004 22:07:19 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club nitetrapper https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/slippinaway/#post-65429 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/slippinaway/#post-65428 Wed, 18 Aug 2004 22:06:49 +0000
Vic]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/slippinaway/#post-65428 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/slippinaway/#post-3163 Wed, 18 Aug 2004 20:22:39 +0000 1.You know how optimistic Iwas before,
Even before the door had opened,
And I can't quite tell if you're sure,
But I was starting to miss the way it was before

And I'm stressed out,
And you know it,
But I told you,
I can hold it,
All in one place,
But there's just too much slippin' away

2.You know how pessimistic you were before,
I'm starting to think I'm goin' to lose you,
You have to find your voice before,
You loseit, You lose it,
And I think I really miss how it was before

Bridge (happy, like elevator music, but faster)
It wasn't any better, It wasn't any better, It- wasn't-any -better
(Electric guitar metal solo, if Ican get it)

And I'm stressed out,
And I know it,
But I told you,
Ican hold it,
All in one place,
And know I know, there was just too much slippin' away

3.You know everything that I told you before,
And I frieked out, so just take it,
Do your own job, by your own self,
Cuz it wasn't my part to do it anyway,
That's okay

I was stressed out,
And we know it,
And I told you,
I can't hold it,
All in this place,
Now it's just not slippin' away

Can you please critique a lot. I'm gonna ask a lot of questions, and here's my first one? Can you figure out the conflict? I'll post more later. :wink:]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club dragona43 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/slippinaway/#post-3163