https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/social-signs/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 11:23:50 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/social-signs/#post-101272 Fri, 06 May 2005 22:23:32 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Mezlay https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/social-signs/#post-101272 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/social-signs/#post-100597 Mon, 02 May 2005 21:52:26 +0000 It sounds kinda funny. Telling a teenager love in a kind of joking way.
I even have some melodies in mind, hehe, I envy you for that lyric :D
Just one little thing, though: I felt the last line kinda didn't come out that strong just from reading through. However, it really may work great with what you got in mind - melody-wise. :lol:]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club m07zm4n https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/social-signs/#post-100597 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/social-signs/#post-8774 Sun, 01 May 2005 21:12:26 +0000
All verses :?:

Will she show
Interest
Towards myself
Or my friend

The plan could be
Me and her
I guess we'll just
Wait and see

She's the beauty
For myself
We'll stand under
Lonley skys
And pray today
Never dies

But that was all
Just a dream
I Know we'd be
The perfect team

Ending: Right now i'm standing all alone
Just waiting for the time to say
What inside I truely feel

pretty short but please critque.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Mezlay https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/social-signs/#post-8774