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When I go to post my lyrics I do them up as a word document then read through them , I add and fix as I go then print it out when I'm happy with it I copy them from my word document and paste them in here then post them .

hope this helps

cheers]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club lotto king https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/step-out/#post-78639 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/step-out/#post-78637 Tue, 07 Dec 2004 12:46:42 +0000 Thanks Again

NeM]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club +LostBeggining+ https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/step-out/#post-78637 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/step-out/#post-78556 Tue, 07 Dec 2004 02:26:42 +0000
Best,


A :-)]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Alan Green https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/step-out/#post-78556 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/step-out/#post-78474 Mon, 06 Dec 2004 14:49:26 +0000
Here's my 2 cents , :)

Sometimes i wish i could step out of time
Put back my heart and take (back) whats mine
Sit (back) on (my/our) shore, (and) stare (at our/out to) sea
Pretend that the world (passing by at my feet /is at our feet)


No matter (all) the pain (that )we feel inside
I wanna take you to a tear drop in the sky

I really like this line , but I think it needs to be shortened a little.
maybe .......
(I'll send your teardrops to the sky)

(Just) to part from everything (we think is/thats) real
(Just let )this warmth (be/is) the only thing we feel

Really nice lyric, looking forward to reading more

:)]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Inkpen https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/step-out/#post-78474 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/step-out/#post-78466 Mon, 06 Dec 2004 12:28:30 +0000 MAYBE A BRIDGE / REPEATING THE CHORUS MAYBE ??????????


OH WELL THAT'S MY THOUGHTS
CHEERS

:? :? :? :?]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club lotto king https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/step-out/#post-78466 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/step-out/#post-78451 Mon, 06 Dec 2004 07:33:57 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club GDJPGR https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/step-out/#post-78451 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/step-out/#post-5355 Mon, 06 Dec 2004 03:59:25 +0000
Step Out

V
Sometimes i wish i could step out of time
Put back my heart and take back whats mine
Sit back on my shore, and stare at our sea
Pretend that the worlds passing by at my feet

C
Been walking this cracking path
To endless times of worry
Ive been to the stars and back
But never escaped the storm
I wanna set something aside
A place where we can fall to
An tunnel where we can hide
When we are frayed and worn

V
No matter all the pain that we feel inside
I wanna take you to a tear drop in the sky
Just to part from everything we think is real
Just let this warmth be the only thing we feel]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club +LostBeggining+ https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/step-out/#post-5355