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									Suggestions please - Guitar Noise Songwriting Club				            </title>
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                        <title>Re: Suggestions please</title>
                        <link>https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/suggestions-please/#post-96418</link>
                        <pubDate>Sat, 02 Apr 2005 16:49:53 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[really like the song....uve got some good use of wording in here....really like the linesIHow could my life be so hard to seeWhen it&#039;s placed right there in front of me


Post More...and don...]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[really like the song....uve got some good use of wording in here....really like the lines<br>I<br><br>How could my life be so hard to see<br>When it's placed right there in front of me


Post More...and dont be hard on yourself!!!<br><br>Keep It Up!!]]></content:encoded>
						                            <category domain="https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/">Guitar Noise Songwriting Club</category>                        <dc:creator>+LostBeggining+</dc:creator>
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                        <title>RE: Suggestions please</title>
                        <link>https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/suggestions-please/#post-96370</link>
                        <pubDate>Sat, 02 Apr 2005 06:24:47 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[Please.More replies!I&#039;m desperate!!!]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[Please.<br><br>More replies!<br><br>I'm desperate!!!]]></content:encoded>
						                            <category domain="https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/">Guitar Noise Songwriting Club</category>                        <dc:creator>the24factorsofseandonovan</dc:creator>
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                        <title>RE: Suggestions please</title>
                        <link>https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/suggestions-please/#post-96103</link>
                        <pubDate>Thu, 31 Mar 2005 07:21:57 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[I know, it sucks. But, hey, I&#039;m a beginner.
I was going to call you a good writer, until I read this. No, just kidding. The song was good. Don&#039;t be so hard on yourself! I&#039;m not good at picki...]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[I know, it sucks. But, hey, I'm a beginner.
I was going to call you a good writer, until I read this. No, just kidding. The song was good. Don't be so hard on yourself! I'm not good at picking out the wrongs of a song, so all I have to say is I liked it. I thought the words in the pre-chorus was clever.<br><br>Keep it up!]]></content:encoded>
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                        <title>Suggestions please</title>
                        <link>https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/suggestions-please/#post-8078</link>
                        <pubDate>Thu, 31 Mar 2005 03:11:55 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[I wrote this song over the past couple of days(I know, I&#039;m a major novice). Please give me suggestions.Easier the Last TimeThings are not the way they were anymoreBut they&#039;re still the same ...]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[I wrote this song over the past couple of days(I know, I'm a major novice). Please give me suggestions.<br><br><B><U>Easier the Last Time</U></B><br><br>Things are not the way they were anymore<br>But they're still the same as before<br>How could my life be so hard to see<br>When it's placed right there in front of me<br><br>-PRE-CHORUS-<br>Even if I try, I won't deny<br>It's so much harder to get by this time<br><br>-CHORUS-<br>Up and over but tied to the floor<br>It was so much easier the last time around<br>Even now, I still wonder why<br>This time is so much harder than the last<br><br>Misused and neglected, I feel like a fake<br>How much more of this can I take?<br>How much longer can I go<br>With all the things that I will never know?<br><br>-PRE-CHORUS-<br>-CHORUS-<br><br>Face down on the ground, stranded and alone<br>I know that I'll never make it on my own<br>Even if I try to hide it<br>I won't deny it<br>It feels so much harder than the last time<br><br>-CHORUS- x2<br><br>I know, it sucks. But, hey, I'm a beginner.<br>Suggestions ASAP!]]></content:encoded>
						                            <category domain="https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/">Guitar Noise Songwriting Club</category>                        <dc:creator>the24factorsofseandonovan</dc:creator>
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