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I decided to see what some of my lyrics garner for feedback.

No audio - I won't punish you with my voice . . .

The Day
by David Wagle

The day that you left
came around again
It's that time of year

Not feeling bereft
saw 12 Angry Men
Had myself a beer

I'm beginning to see the sun rise
I'm beginning to see the blue skies
I'm beginning to feel some new highs
and I don't feel guilty at all

The day that we met
came around again
It's that time of year

Not feeling upset
saw Of Mice and Men
had another beer

I'm wanting to see the sun rise
I'm wanting to see the blue skies
I'm wanting to feel some new highs
and I hardly feel guilty at all

The day that I lied
came around again
It's that time of year

I'm feelin' set aside
I'm watchin' CNN
there's not enough beer

I know I won't see the sun rise
I know I won't see the blue skies
I know I won't feel some new highs
'cause guilt is all I feel

why me!
you know I never meant it.
Why me!
you know that I regret it.
Why!
I know that I deserve this.

The day that I died
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