https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-end/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 11:10:11 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-end/#post-64474 Wed, 04 Aug 2004 11:01:08 +0000

I might rewrite the chorus, but I'm not sure. I kind of like it, though I know it's not very complicated. But as you said, sometimes a lyric sounds different when you hear it, than it does when you read it.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Jonsi https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-end/#post-64474 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-end/#post-64456 Wed, 04 Aug 2004 04:30:05 +0000
I do like where it's going...


I really like the idea of verse 2

Verse 2
You look so good
with tears in your eyes,
but since I'm loosing you,
I'm tired of being nice.
Instead I hurt you!
I say things that make you weep
and though it makes me smile
it somehow makes me feel cheap.

But it seems like it would make more sense to say:
You look so good
with tears in your eyes,
because I'm loosing you,
I'm tired of being nice.
Instead I hurt you!

just a thought.

G]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club gmilam https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-end/#post-64456 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-end/#post-2987 Wed, 04 Aug 2004 00:40:19 +0000

The End

Verse 1
This is the end.
Everything stops here.
Though you seem to want to
you don't let me near.
I tried to kiss you,
but you pushed me away!
Though your eyes seem hungry
Your words don't want me to stay

Chorus
Girl, please no! No! No! Oh no!
Girl, please no! No! No! Oh no!

Verse 2
You look so good
with tears in your eyes,
because I'm loosing you,
I'm tired of being nice.
Instead I hurt you!
I say things that make you weep
and though it makes me smile
it somehow makes me feel cheap.

Chorus

Bridge
I walk away from you
as slowly as I can do.
Because every step I take,
take me further away from you.
And I listen to the silence
between my stumbling steps.

(But I don't hear you coming after me.)

Chorus

Verse 3
You look so good
with tears in your eyes.
Though you seem to want to,
you don't let me near.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Jonsi https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-end/#post-2987