https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-hated-mind-what-do-you-guys-think/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 01:30:35 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-hated-mind-what-do-you-guys-think/#post-117764 Mon, 15 Aug 2005 12:17:36 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club pierson https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-hated-mind-what-do-you-guys-think/#post-117764 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-hated-mind-what-do-you-guys-think/#post-116250 Tue, 09 Aug 2005 00:31:22 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club sjboller https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-hated-mind-what-do-you-guys-think/#post-116250 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-hated-mind-what-do-you-guys-think/#post-116248 Tue, 09 Aug 2005 00:26:36 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club PoeticSmile https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-hated-mind-what-do-you-guys-think/#post-116248 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-hated-mind-what-do-you-guys-think/#post-116247 Tue, 09 Aug 2005 00:20:09 +0000
My point being ... I don't know what my point is. I'm not sure what your point is either. Okay .. you're pissed .... life sucks ... why should people even live? Fine. I can understand and relate to that. But tell us more.

There better be some damn good guitar riffs to this song ... because they are gonna have to carry it. You weren't shy when it came to swearing in your lyrics .. and I don't have any bone to pick with cussing in song lyrics. Take a look at John Lennon's "Working Class Hero". But then why the hell did you use "poop"???? It can't be a hardcore metal song with the word POOP in it ... period. Change the word .. send me some good guitar riffs and maybe I'll have more to say. Until then, welcome to GN forum and keep up the writing!

I'm not writing this post to be funny or to make fun of the song. I'm just saying I don't see the point in it ... the lyrics feel empty to me. If you have an .mp3 of the song ... bring it on! I'd like to see how it comes together.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club sjboller https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-hated-mind-what-do-you-guys-think/#post-116247 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-hated-mind-what-do-you-guys-think/#post-10812 Mon, 08 Aug 2005 21:32:21 +0000 The Hated Mind

(verse)
Everybody, everybody, everybody… what the fuck are you waitin for?
Everybody, everybody, everybody… tell me what you're livin for
Where am I?
Where am I?
Everybody is ruined

(chorus)
Die! What you're livin for 2
Die! What you're livin for
Die! What you're livin for
Destroyed

(verse)
1 2 3 you're knocked the fuck out
Pinned, you're caught, run, no doubt
Find, steal, and run, you're already called out
Understand the criminal mind!
Understand his cell, before you step in
His life is shit, nothing to lose; you've got everything he wants
Be careful what you choose.

(chorus)
Die! What you're livin for
Die! What you're livin for
Die! What you're livin for
Destroyed*

(verse)
He's stuck… no one to forgive him
You stare… trying to understand him
Knife in hand, bloody and torn
Life misunderstood, destroyed by the fuckin law
Anticipate the anticipated
Fight and understand what you've created
Understand that this man is fuckin hated

(chorus)
Die! What you're livin for
Die! What you're livin for
Die! What you're livin for
Destroyed*

(bridge)
Death.
Pain. 2
Law.
What the fuck are we livin for?

This life-
Is fucked-
This world- 2
Has run outa luck!

(chorus)
Die! What you're livin for
Die! What you're livin for
Die! What you're livin for
Destroyed*]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Diluted_Metal https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-hated-mind-what-do-you-guys-think/#post-10812