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And of course, all the input is greatly appreciated.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Illicit https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-march/#post-166868 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-march/#post-166656 Sat, 18 Mar 2006 18:22:24 +0000
Apart from that, it's a good song. You play and sing very well, and the mixing of the track is done well too (certainly better than I could do).

I like the lyrics, especially in the verses. I think that the chorus is weaker though. If I were you I would rethink both the lyrics and the rhythm of the chorus.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club martin-6 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-march/#post-166656 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-march/#post-166601 Sat, 18 Mar 2006 08:45:18 +0000
I got you on my mind, Hey love.

Dun dunnn

Something, something, something, Hey love.

I like it though, although the voiceovers sound sort of oddly placed.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Saber https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-march/#post-166601 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-march/#post-16342 Sat, 18 Mar 2006 01:30:13 +0000

Edit: Overdubbed some guitar (maybe it's worth mentioning I'm not a guitarist and I'm struggling with the thin strings :P)
http://s48.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=37J8TZXQ2DQZX037NJ1H7FFT9P






Haven't you heard?
A kiss is worth a fortune now
They sell in schoolyards, wrap it in plastic for me

Where's the world going?
I don't know, I don't know, I don't know
I wanna see a little love, encourage me to say

Keep marching on, singing
Have been for so long
Keep marching on, dreaming
Have been for so long

So nature's dying?
Well, what did ya think?
You left it in gutters, put poison down the sink

Humanity's screwed?
Well, no secret there.
Insensitivity breeds, there's war on the streets
Where will it end? Just..

Keep marching on, singing
Have been for so long
Keep marching on, dreaming
Have been for so long

It rained today
Almost washed me away
Yeah, it rained today
And I was the rain

Wash the scum away (forgot to actually sing this..)
Yeah, I was the rain


Keep marching on, singing (Wash the world away)
Have been for so long
Keep marching on, dreaming
Have been for so long]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Illicit https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/the-march/#post-16342