https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/tonight-first-song-written/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 20:03:35 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/tonight-first-song-written/#post-98485 Fri, 15 Apr 2005 19:24:27 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/tonight-first-song-written/#post-98485 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/tonight-first-song-written/#post-98234 Thu, 14 Apr 2005 01:35:07 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club hillibilly https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/tonight-first-song-written/#post-98234 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/tonight-first-song-written/#post-96684 Mon, 04 Apr 2005 10:52:41 +0000 I specially love this verse

But when you are a stranger like I,
the cold always muffles the vries.
And all that is left is a weak little sigh
As the sun says its goodbyes
bright!

My opinion is... make it simple.... you wont remember that lyrics with all those strange words ex. "th suns mighty ray turn into tiny slimmers"
Nice story... just work the timing of words and it'll rock]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club noel-iu https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/tonight-first-song-written/#post-96684 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/tonight-first-song-written/#post-8168 Mon, 04 Apr 2005 03:28:16 +0000 and I'am walking home.
The cold quickly comes over me,
I kind finally scream.

But when you are a stranger like I,
the cold always muffles the cries.
And all that is left is a weak little sigh
As the sun says its goodbyes

But the street lights are glowin
The moon has a rosen...tonight
The stars shine brightly
The city is sleeping.....tonight

As I finally see my home in the distance,
the dark turns into a timeless existence.
And as the feeling of lonileness lingers
th suns mighty rays turn into tiny slimmers.

But the street lights are glowin
The moon has a rosen...tonight
The stars shine brightly
The city is sleeping......tonight 2x]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club hillibilly https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/tonight-first-song-written/#post-8168